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Reinero
ReineroLv124yr
2020-09-01 09:04

This is the story about fl suffer from various scheme and notorious plan of unknown origin simply because fl is.... sh!t i have no idea why. After she marry with ml, everything change. The story sums up pretty much fl with her pig teammate(ml included) and she have to sort it out alone with everything. Ml in the story is useless bag of sh!t. the only thing good about this novel is the romance are great, pretty straightforward with not many drama attached. In conclusion, if you dont mind force plot with fl plot armor shoving everywhere, this is story for you. But if you looking a good clever mc with a good plot, you better drop it.

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