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ReineroLv124yr
2020-09-01 01:04

This is the story about fl suffer from various scheme and notorious plan of unknown origin simply because fl is.... sh!t i have no idea why. After she marry with ml, everything change. The story sums up pretty much fl with her pig teammate(ml included) and she have to sort it out alone with everything. Ml in the story is useless bag of sh!t. the only thing good about this novel is the romance are great, pretty straightforward with not many drama attached. In conclusion, if you dont mind force plot with fl plot armor shoving everywhere, this is story for you. But if you looking a good clever mc with a good plot, you better drop it.

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SunScar9
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This is the kind of story I usually go for. So I was quite pleased and read through the story at a rapid pace. Of course, I am here to give constructive criticism and tell you all the good things about the plot. Stability of Updates: I trust in the author and know that sometimes things happen. For now, she has been consistent and I don't think that will change any time soon. And I know to wait for a good story. This will definitely be one I will be reading. Story Development: The story is paced neither too fast nor too slow. This makes it easy for the readers to breeze through the story without feeling strained and bored about what is to happen next. World Background: I would like for more information on the world, but I realize that the story is too new to make judgments on right now. So I will keep reading and give my thoughts on it on a later date. Character Development: I don't quite enjoy the characters, to be honest, but that is my personal opinion. I have a serious problem with the male lead's attitude and the college setting is not something I expected in a strongly supernatural novel, but I will give the author the benefit of doubt. I really think that the characters need to mature more as the chapters go or I won't be able to enjoy the story. Writing Quality: The quality is good. Even though I found some sentences to be complicated and not precise, I think the writer has a lot of potential and will improve in no time. There needs to be slight changes in the mode of narration, but I enjoy the consistency of thought of the characters. Sometimes, though, they seem a bit repetitive. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

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Writing Quality: 5/5 the quality and how the author narrates the story is pretty interesting. You don't have to deal with grammatical errors and glaring moments -- you just have to enjoy and let your imagination growl. Stability Update: 5/5 it was already stated that there will be a one chapter daily release since there is still an ongoing book the author is working on. But, I hope there's more because I'm greedy as that. Story Development: its progress is neither slow nor fast. Just enough to make one understand where it was going and wonders the future progress. It's actually surprising that despite the dropped information, I am still very intrigued -- which piqued my sleeping reader soul from its slumber. Character Design: 5/5 although there are still little dialogues, each character that was shown in the first 6 chapters makes me feel they are real. Each character has their own special personalities that made them stand out -- whether it was a good or bad personality. World Background: is this set in modern days? I assumed it is. And I'm amazed that beneath the normal human world, unbeknownst to them, a seemingly race that they could only see in movies aren't just one's figment of imagination which I think, this one aspect makes me like the story even more. Overall, this is a well-written book -- no doubt! I've seen many books about vampires and such, but this is somewhat refreshing to me. Though there are lots of werewolves stories out there, Feral Confession is one with great potential. A must read!

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