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SunScar9
SunScar9Lv45yr
2019-06-10 16:23

This is the kind of story I usually go for. So I was quite pleased and read through the story at a rapid pace. Of course, I am here to give constructive criticism and tell you all the good things about the plot. Stability of Updates: I trust in the author and know that sometimes things happen. For now, she has been consistent and I don't think that will change any time soon. And I know to wait for a good story. This will definitely be one I will be reading. Story Development: The story is paced neither too fast nor too slow. This makes it easy for the readers to breeze through the story without feeling strained and bored about what is to happen next. World Background: I would like for more information on the world, but I realize that the story is too new to make judgments on right now. So I will keep reading and give my thoughts on it on a later date. Character Development: I don't quite enjoy the characters, to be honest, but that is my personal opinion. I have a serious problem with the male lead's attitude and the college setting is not something I expected in a strongly supernatural novel, but I will give the author the benefit of doubt. I really think that the characters need to mature more as the chapters go or I won't be able to enjoy the story. Writing Quality: The quality is good. Even though I found some sentences to be complicated and not precise, I think the writer has a lot of potential and will improve in no time. There needs to be slight changes in the mode of narration, but I enjoy the consistency of thought of the characters. Sometimes, though, they seem a bit repetitive. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha

MishaK
4.7
544 Chs

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MishaK
MishaKAuthor

Thanks Sunscar:) Will try to improve on these points!

5yr
Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

5yr
Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

5yr
Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

5yr
Ashpenn31
Ashpenn31Lv10

I definitely agree. The story is told at the right pace.

5yr
Sunny_Sol
Sunny_SolLv3

I like the creative criticism. I feel it helps the author and the story overall

5yr
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Sunny_Sol
Sunny_SolLv3

Yay!

MishaK:Thanks Sunscar:) Will try to improve on these points!
5yr
resendizshattuck
resendizshattuckLv15

Same with the writing. Took the words out my mouth. But also when rapid reading I had to go back a few times to recheck. Lol

5yr
Free_Spirited_Nerd
Free_Spirited_NerdLv2

Completely agree! This story is so amazing

5yr
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MishaK
MishaKAuthor

Shameless 5 star review by the author! The story is not about a typical damsel in distress, rather it takes you on a journey as to how FL evolves into becoming a strong person. Give it some time and you will find yourself cruising through a variety of emotions:)

5yr

Browneyesblkdragon
BrowneyesblkdragonLv15

Another one in the bag and the stories keep getting better 👏🏾🙌🏾🥰😘😁☺️ I know I started this series out of order; however, it doesn’t take away from how each book overlaps but also maintains it’s singular story plots. The fast paceness of this story along with the world building keeps the reader engaged. I think I read this book faster that the Silver Crescent Alpha Prince 🤣😂 I couldn’t get enough of the angst, drama, internal/external turmoil, comedic banter, high-tension thrill of the fighting and much more 🙌🏾 The character development was outstanding as it gave readers a deeper understanding of their favorite character, but most importantly, the intricacies of their personalities shone through. There was never a dull moment when it came to the break down of the characters emotions, how they managed them, what they did to overcome those hurdles etc. Although this story is purely fiction, there are some nuanced moments that emulate real life scenarios where it forces the reader to question themselves on how they would handle specific situations. Overall, I went in expecting a lot, but got WAY more than what I was expecting 🙌🏾👏🏾 MishaK, you’ve done it again and I can’t wait to read the 3rd book in this installation 🥰

2yr
Foenix
FoenixLv12

There can be plenty of werewolf stories found elsewhere but most of the ones I've tried are pretty trashy with bad quality writing. This is one of the few that hooked me and has kept my interest. It sounds cliche from the synopsis but the ultimate path to get there looks exciting and wild. I'll be keeping my eyes on this one.

5yr
Zehell2218
Zehell2218Lv13

it's only 3 chapters by now but the mystery surrounding this novel makes me want to read more! Up until this newest chp I still haven't know who is the ML so this is exciting. Try this and I'll never regret it

5yr
Boltux2
Boltux2Lv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr
kEllS3317
kEllS3317Lv5

Wow wow wow wearwolf storyl!!! I'm so glad that I found this story here I was downloading other story app full of wearwolf and vampire ... since I love webnovel so much I'm so happy that I found this story here

4yr
Candace_Forbes
Candace_ForbesLv14

There are some chapters here and there with some serious editorial errors, but regardless- this book is a page turner! It took me less than a week to read up to this point and I anticipate the next release of chapters!!! I’m in love and hope that this turns into a series that gets picked up by the movies, or Netflix, or Amazon Prime or something!! ❤️❤️❤️

5yr
Pryzeless
PryzelessLv12

I have watched films about werewolf when I was young but never read a novel so captivating like fera's confession. I keep wanting to read more everyday. Thump up Mishak 😍

5yr
BAJJ
BAJJLv14

Writing Quality: 5/5 the quality and how the author narrates the story is pretty interesting. You don't have to deal with grammatical errors and glaring moments -- you just have to enjoy and let your imagination growl. Stability Update: 5/5 it was already stated that there will be a one chapter daily release since there is still an ongoing book the author is working on. But, I hope there's more because I'm greedy as that. Story Development: its progress is neither slow nor fast. Just enough to make one understand where it was going and wonders the future progress. It's actually surprising that despite the dropped information, I am still very intrigued -- which piqued my sleeping reader soul from its slumber. Character Design: 5/5 although there are still little dialogues, each character that was shown in the first 6 chapters makes me feel they are real. Each character has their own special personalities that made them stand out -- whether it was a good or bad personality. World Background: is this set in modern days? I assumed it is. And I'm amazed that beneath the normal human world, unbeknownst to them, a seemingly race that they could only see in movies aren't just one's figment of imagination which I think, this one aspect makes me like the story even more. Overall, this is a well-written book -- no doubt! I've seen many books about vampires and such, but this is somewhat refreshing to me. Though there are lots of werewolves stories out there, Feral Confession is one with great potential. A must read!

5yr
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