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FlammableFire
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2023-07-28 00:51

Read till chapter 47. It's good. The MC is a bit thick at times and the gags grew too invasive, but it ultimately isn't enough to get antsy about. The story is fairly solid and not just another heap of chuuni trash. The only reason I stopped reading was because of the plot-hole-birthed melodrama that came with the MC's first relationship. I won't go into detail about it, nor do I know if it was ever resolved satisfactorily, but it was enough to make me not want to read anymore. P.S. I also learned that I would rather things turn into a harem than have to read through ill-thought romantic drama that doesn't really have a reason to exist... But I've never really like drama to begin with, so maybe it's just me.

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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor

Thanks for the review, and fyi, the romance was resolved pretty good. I read the criticism I got and the ending was very liked by everyone. He does kiss another girl though, but after that there's no more romance until it gets resolved at the ending

FlammableFire
FlammableFireLv11

Good to hear. I guess I'll return and see how it ends.

Passerby_Venne:Thanks for the review, and fyi, the romance was resolved pretty good. I read the criticism I got and the ending was very liked by everyone. He does kiss another girl though, but after that there's no more romance until it gets resolved at the ending
Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

The author is the one telling you it’s good so I domt have much faith

FlammableFire:Good to hear. I guess I'll return and see how it ends.
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