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OukisLipsLv151yr
2023-03-16 01:46

This story is pretty good. The only complaint I have is that the author committed the same mistake that many authors do: randomly nerfing the MC and/or buffing the enemy in order to make a fight entertaining. Apparently most readers don't mind about consistency as long as there's action, but personally I'd rather read a story with a consistent setting than constant action

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Passerby_VenneAuthor

Have you read the latest chapter, did your opinion change. I worked hard to better the story 馃槉

OukisLipsLv15

Haven't read it yet. I'll give it a go

Passerby_Venne:Have you read the latest chapter, did your opinion change. I worked hard to better the story 馃槉
MortiferLv14

Ooof, a nerf. Yuck. Good thing I checked reviews before reading.

Passerby_Venne:Have you read the latest chapter, did your opinion change. I worked hard to better the story 馃槉
BoredDaemonGodLv4

what nerf we talking about? is it like his abilities can be locked with dampening collars?

OukisLipsLv15

No, it鈥檚 just a general nerf of his abilities. The nerf isn鈥檛 too bad. The real problem is the buff that all the marvel characters receive

BoredDaemonGod:what nerf we talking about? is it like his abilities can be locked with dampening collars?
BoredDaemonGodLv4

I see, the power scale is a bit screwed in the beginning if I may say, it seems author making the marvel characters based on their powerful version, but mc power is less powerful while the reason behind is acceptable people still feel frustrated about it, also there is a bit inconsistency with mc power like already able to bathe in surface of sun while still not adult yet, hopefully author learn from these mistakes

OukisLips:No, it鈥檚 just a general nerf of his abilities. The nerf isn鈥檛 too bad. The real problem is the buff that all the marvel characters receive
KiiidddLv14

Yeah I had a hard time with the consistency of the MC's powers. He goes from being fast enough to basically stop time(football scene) to being unable to dodge blows from the Hulk

BoredDaemonGod:I see, the power scale is a bit screwed in the beginning if I may say, it seems author making the marvel characters based on their powerful version, but mc power is less powerful while the reason behind is acceptable people still feel frustrated about it, also there is a bit inconsistency with mc power like already able to bathe in surface of sun while still not adult yet, hopefully author learn from these mistakes
Eins_MenschLv14

Yes... now it turned in some crack fanfic chimera.

Passerby_Venne:Have you read the latest chapter, did your opinion change. I worked hard to better the story 馃槉
Damian0481Lv13

he cant dodge hulk? what garbage is he lol

Kiiiddd:Yeah I had a hard time with the consistency of the MC's powers. He goes from being fast enough to basically stop time(football scene) to being unable to dodge blows from the Hulk
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