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HouseLv154yr
2020-06-18 07:10

WARNING BETA MC!!!! - MC still retarded ✔️ - MC still no backbone ✔️ - Author still giving ****ty excuses for a BETA MC. ✔️ ^like it's weak to strong guys lil does he know he has been weak/retarded/useless/spineless for more then a year Gets blackmailed more than fmc in hentai But don't take my word for it. Just look at the commends on chapters..... And if that is not enough this is what other characters think of him "She just sees you as a pathetic idiot who would do anything if she just points her gun at you. She even called you a coward with who would never stand up for himself," <-- Thats the MC The only thing your story accomplished is make the readers FRUSTRATED it took WAY to long to change the mc I'm sure you lost most of your readers. Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐

The Ladies Gang Puppet Leader (18+) (Warning: Explicit sexual content)

Roeselawik
4.4
79 Chs

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LustDemon
LustDemonLv1

his other novel The sex beast system has also the same **** going on.... he says i am going for weak to strong story.... but why a retarded MC though... weak doesn't mean he has to be braindead....and it is still going on like that and we are more than 100 chapters in the story... the only thing i see is him getting more and more stupid by time...rhw reason i read till now was only for smut scenes else i dont give **** about his novels.... i think the author relate himself with his MC's persona in evey novel to come up with a brainless MC... lol... 🤦‍♂️

4yr
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Gerell_Celestain
Gerell_CelestainLv1

This aged well XD

3yr
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Roeselawik
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LET"S RATE GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Qizey
QizeyLv11

I remember this premises from japanese novel somewhere - R***d his first love - Getting entangled with a criminal organisation ( the difference is the other one is a pure prostitution business while this one is a massive criminal organisation ) But this has a promising storyline if played correctly. I just hope that there will be no magic shenanigans whatsoever for this one Looking forward for the MC character development as the other novel had a such a dark "broken" MC but that's what made it such a good read

5yr
Jaguared
JaguaredLv4

Overall nice novel, the story is interesting if you keep on reading it, on first the story will not take you in but when you keep on reading it the story is good the writing keeps on improving as the story progress just keep up the good work and don't drop it.

5yr
Lotus_Spriti
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Reveal spoiler

5yr
Miss_Mammaries
Miss_MammariesLv11

Reveal spoiler

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Vanadhi_Lucia
Vanadhi_LuciaLv6

This Majesty gives All Big Five Stars for this Novel!!!!! Anyone have problem with it????? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

5yr
Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6

Just here to support author, good story and love the world building. At Least the way he gets into girls pants is believable, not like other novel where girl instantly falls for the MC. To people who think MC is a coward, what do expect from a normal high school student who was suddenly kidnapped and either choose between death and work for them. At least the way he reacts is in the realm of common sense.

5yr
biplavsubedi
biplavsubediLv3

Wow he gets to do to his gf, her sister and mother. Wow he is going to living in pleasure of heaven where utmost pleasure lies. I wish it will release at list 2 chapter a week. And finally mc is going to man up.

4yr
Eclipze_Rabid
Eclipze_RabidLv1

I love this book so far. I picked it up a few days ago and it was the first in read. It has a good story and the characters are put in situations tgat make the book interesting to read. I am excited to see updates to this book because i can fully say that the author put alot of time and effort into writing it.

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