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Miss_MammariesLv114yr
2020-05-20 11:01

The story is good enough to get me to read all there is and it is somewhat entertaining, but holy sh*it is the MC not likable!! He is a thinker, rarely talks unless he is barking at someone for doing something he doesnt like and when he tries to act out a plan he ALWAYS messes it up! So far two gangs are extorting him with nudes of him and his girlfriend to get then to do things to her family or something lame. Mc says he will protect lily but he never lifts a finger because he cant and even when he can, he wont. I wouldnt be surprised if somewhere down the line FL Lily gets gang-ra*ped by many multiple guys because she is told to for the sake of her boyfriend. It is actually infuriating to read so i am dropping, however at least try it before you drop.

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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

He finally snaps but it start at c 56 so he is finally learning he actually has control.

Miss_Mammaries
Miss_MammariesLv11

I am curious what plot armor he has.

Harem_fan:He finally snaps but it start at c 56 so he is finally learning he actually has control.
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Ha ha plot armor..no no no....he is pretty much given a big dose of negative karma till he finally breaks...now I believe he is taking it back.

Miss_Mammaries:I am curious what plot armor he has.
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