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Lotus_Spriti
Lotus_SpritiLv45yr
2019-06-22 23:40

I just wanna say ...it is interesting trust me .... but only thing I hate is the writer is not updating frequently I hope he do .... huh... (°¤° ) otherwise whole plot is nice and good .. I also donated my" poWER STOne " so I hope you consider my request

The Ladies Gang Puppet Leader (18+) (Warning: Explicit sexual content)

Roeselawik
4.4
79 Chs

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Daoist327060
Daoist327060Lv4

I also so agree !!

5yr
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Roeselawik
RoeselawikAuthor

Oh, I actually have another novel i work on so, I basically post a chapter daily... it's just that writing TLGPL chapters takes some extra time from my side as I am new writer and this is my first book. I hope you understand!

5yr
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simmiprit
simmipritLv4

Oh .. it's okay I understand but still I hope you will be merciful enough to post 1 ch b/w 2 days maybe ... or something! 🙏🙏

Roeselawik:Oh, I actually have another novel i work on so, I basically post a chapter daily... it's just that writing TLGPL chapters takes some extra time from my side as I am new writer and this is my first book. I hope you understand!
5yr
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simmiprit
simmipritLv4

Oh .. it's okay I understand but still I hope you will be merciful enough to post 1 ch b/w 2 days maybe ... or something! 🙏🙏

Roeselawik:Oh, I actually have another novel i work on so, I basically post a chapter daily... it's just that writing TLGPL chapters takes some extra time from my side as I am new writer and this is my first book. I hope you understand!
5yr
3
simmiprit
simmipritLv4

Oh .. it's okay I understand but still I hope you will be merciful enough to post 1 ch b/w 2 days maybe ... or something! 🙏🙏

Roeselawik:Oh, I actually have another novel i work on so, I basically post a chapter daily... it's just that writing TLGPL chapters takes some extra time from my side as I am new writer and this is my first book. I hope you understand!
5yr
3
simmiprit
simmipritLv4

Oh .. it's okay I understand but still I hope you will be merciful enough to post 1 ch b/w 2 days maybe ... or something! 🙏🙏

Roeselawik:Oh, I actually have another novel i work on so, I basically post a chapter daily... it's just that writing TLGPL chapters takes some extra time from my side as I am new writer and this is my first book. I hope you understand!
5yr
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LET"S RATE GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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House
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WARNING BETA MC!!!! - MC still retarded ✔️ - MC still no backbone ✔️ - Author still giving ****ty excuses for a BETA MC. ✔️ ^like it's weak to strong guys lil does he know he has been weak/retarded/useless/spineless for more then a year Gets blackmailed more than fmc in hentai But don't take my word for it. Just look at the commends on chapters..... And if that is not enough this is what other characters think of him "She just sees you as a pathetic idiot who would do anything if she just points her gun at you. She even called you a coward with who would never stand up for himself," <-- Thats the MC The only thing your story accomplished is make the readers FRUSTRATED it took WAY to long to change the mc I'm sure you lost most of your readers. Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐

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Qizey
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I remember this premises from japanese novel somewhere - R***d his first love - Getting entangled with a criminal organisation ( the difference is the other one is a pure prostitution business while this one is a massive criminal organisation ) But this has a promising storyline if played correctly. I just hope that there will be no magic shenanigans whatsoever for this one Looking forward for the MC character development as the other novel had a such a dark "broken" MC but that's what made it such a good read

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Jaguared
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Overall nice novel, the story is interesting if you keep on reading it, on first the story will not take you in but when you keep on reading it the story is good the writing keeps on improving as the story progress just keep up the good work and don't drop it.

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Miss_Mammaries
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Reveal spoiler

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Vanadhi_Lucia
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Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6

Just here to support author, good story and love the world building. At Least the way he gets into girls pants is believable, not like other novel where girl instantly falls for the MC. To people who think MC is a coward, what do expect from a normal high school student who was suddenly kidnapped and either choose between death and work for them. At least the way he reacts is in the realm of common sense.

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biplavsubedi
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Wow he gets to do to his gf, her sister and mother. Wow he is going to living in pleasure of heaven where utmost pleasure lies. I wish it will release at list 2 chapter a week. And finally mc is going to man up.

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Eclipze_Rabid
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I love this book so far. I picked it up a few days ago and it was the first in read. It has a good story and the characters are put in situations tgat make the book interesting to read. I am excited to see updates to this book because i can fully say that the author put alot of time and effort into writing it.

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