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Reis123

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I'm handsome. No, I'm not lying... Yeah I am

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    Replied to NitroMiyazaki

    I play "author creativity liberty" card, it applies a strong illusion field that allows me to skip over small plot holes.

    Shifting his body a bit to better distribute Yuna's weight and free a numb arm, Drifter caressed her silky hair. When he first met her, Yuna's hair was only shoulder length, but she had opted for letting it grow after finding out how much he enjoyed running his fingers through it.
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    Replied to catalop01

    It's an AU, but the changes start slowly.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 - Party
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    Replied to NitroMiyazaki

    Yup, that was my mistake. I only noticed I had mixed floors when I was writing the chapter after the next, and by then this one was already written and ready to post, so I left it at that.

    "It's for sale."
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    Replied to Nobume_Imai_5090

    I've gotta ask, what language is that?

    "Zumfut? What a name."
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    Replied to Nobume_Imai_5090

    That's one of the reasons I added the broadcasts to the story. If the players were just in a coma and nobody knew what was happening to them, like in the anime, what you said would be true. But with the broadcast, the whole world watching, the government has no option but to give them the best care.

    No one contested him. In hindsight, it was obvious. Other than the 2.000 at the start, less than 600 people had died. Most on the 2nd and 3rd floors. Less than 10 on the 7th, 8th, and 9th floors each. Kayaba had been treating them with kid gloves. No more.
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    Replied to Yggdras1ll

    I don't believe there was a set time, so in my mind I made them start to appear a little later in, first as expensive amd exclusive items, then getting more common as time goes on

    The player who had been running towards them, shouting for help, had disappeared. But, it couldn't be! He hadn't heard him yell, nor the sound of glass shattering that accompanied a player's death. Regardless of what he thought, the five << Ruin Kobolds >> who had been hunting the player now turned their sights to Drifter's party.
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    Replied to Lordof_Megaverse

    He is not a canon character, but one of the side characters I introduced. So are Shigio and Namate. At the start of the anime, Agil has a party, though they only appear briefly and are never mentioned again.

    That night had been the first time Drifter saw Agil and Shigio so angry. Wolv had gotten two earfuls from them. He would get another one from his girlfriend when they got out of SAO, as she was not amused when she heard it.
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    Replied to LStar_334

    I was waiting for it! Doesn't feel like the chapter has been properly posted until I see your Hiya❤️.

    Chapter 123 - The True Monsters
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    Replied to Pyrokinetic

    Author here, thanks for pointing it out! That's a problem that happened after one of Webnovel's updates a few months back, which erased words inside some of the <> symbols (but now all, which is somehow more annoying). As you will see, later on I changed skill and mob names to italic so we didn't have this problem anymore. I'll probably go through the fic and do the same to the chapters written before the update at some moment, but haven't had the time yet. If you spot any more of the same problem, feel free to point it out so I can fix them and make the story better!

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    Replied to Demonshadow639

    It's not in the anime, but it's a major plotline of the manga and light novels.

    I was very excited to write this chapter, because this is the first boss fight that doesn't appear in canon. We pretty much only know the name of the boss, so everything else was left up to my imagination. I hope you like it!
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    Replied to That_Annoying_guy

    No romance

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    Replied to Rubi_Stone

    Sounds like you have lots of pent-up aggression. If you want to find an "original" story, try not looking at the fanfic section, it kinda defeats the point, don't you think? Not even going to dignify the last portion of the review with an answer since it's just an insult

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    Replied to HerRoyalReader

    If you ate talking about the time it took for them to find the boss room of the 1st floor, even in the anime (and I believe also the novel) it was still just 1 month.

    December 3rd 2022, Tolbana.
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    Replied to read3r_9030

    You aren't the first to say that. I haven't read Unyielding or any other SAO fanfic (I try not to read fiction of things I plan to write about), but it's already on my list for when Shattered is over, since so many people said it's one of the best SAO fics out there.

    The info broker was so focused on her inner thoughts that it took her a few seconds to notice the blinking in her HUD. It was a different kind of notification than any she had ever came across. It looked almost like a... Camera? Unsure, she tapped on it. The next moment, her jaw dropped.
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    Replied to Beamingkangaroo

    After Webnovel's latest update, I can't denote skills and items like I did before, with the <<>>, so I'm using italics. And I always used them for emphasis when I deemed necessary.

    Ch 95 Chapter 95 - Bamboo Maze
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    Replied to Fifth_Daoist

    By now you've already seen the new release, but I've been focused on my finals for this semester and also wrapping up the last few things in my workplace (I'm changing jobs) so I haven't gotten much time to write. I should probably have given you guys a notice, but I will admit I forgot with everything that was happening.

    Ch 93 Chapter 93 - The 10th Floor
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    Replied to Blake_Silver

    Remember that the bet about the secret came before the whole Morte drama

    Ch 92 Chapter 92 - Confessions
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    Replied to BlazeXII

    Webnovel screwed up on their last update. I thought I had fixed everything, but evidently I missed one. Thanks for pointing that out!

    Ch 76 Chapter 76 - The Last Line
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    Replied to DrakuLykos

    No, he might be weaker at the start, simce Kirito is a beta-tester and used to games while he is not, but he quickly gets stronger. By saying the mc won't overshadow Kirito, I mean that he won't be overpowered. SAO is, at the core, about teamwork and whatnot, and that is also a big part of the fanfic

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    Replied to RAAAHHHHH

    No, the revive item has (canon) a 10 seconds window to be used. Meaning, if you don't revive the player within 10 seconds of their death, the NerveGear fries their brain

    What Shivata proposed today has to be carefully considered, even if he was inclined to agree. If they could focus on finishing the << Elf War >> campaign, his party would save a lot of time - and that was the most valuable currency in Sword Art Online. How long did they have until their bodies in the real world decayed? How long did they have until somebody outside decided pulling the plug was a mercy? How long until the players gave up?
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