Great grammar and spelling so far (which compared to 99% of the novels on this godforsaken app is amazing) Huge potential for the plot so far and no real qualms with any of the character interactions so far Great at explaining the system and abilities What can I say? This novel is pretty awesome! ✌🏼
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LIKEA little? Unless your first language isn't English dismissive or not the English gets bad in the later chapters.
JimmyBlah:Might’ve been a lil dismissive of some things since I’ve been a fan of dbz since 2011 😅
It gets bad but it is definitely readable. Personaly I dont think its as bad as you are making it out to be, not like its something thats impossibel to understand.
chaosflame:A little? Unless your first language isn't English dismissive or not the English gets bad in the later chapters.