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DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]
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DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

Monster_Paradise

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What is DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] is a popular fanfic written by the author Monster_Paradise, covering SYSTEM, HAREM, MALE PROTAGONIST, RUTHLESS PROTAGONIST, DRAGONBALL, OVERPOWERED PROTAGONIST, PERVERTED PROTAGONIST, UNDERESTIMATED PROTAGONIST, RIGHTEOUS PROTAGONIST, SECRETIVE PROTAGONIST, Anime & Comics genres. It's viewed by 2.4M readers with an average rating of 4.58/5 and 92 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 89 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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This is a story centered around a man named Luke who was coming from watching the New Dragonball Super Broly Movie. Sadly, Luke gets into a car accident, ending his life. Luke will be given a second chance of his choosing, meaning he can choose which world to reincarnate in. Anyone can probably guess what he will pick. He asked to be Goku and Raditz's brother but the one in between, so he is the middle brother now. Watch as Kayn(Luke) Rises to power against all the villains that invade the earth with the help of all the Z fighters and some extras who should have died in the main series or non-canon series.

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zen_garden
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crywolfseven
crywolfsevenLv4crywolfseven

You’re off to a pretty good start just really hope you don’t end up doing the whole harem route as that will always ruin a good story. Anyways thank you for your story and keep up the great work!

pan39
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JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv5JimmyBlah

Great grammar and spelling so far (which compared to 99% of the novels on this godforsaken app is amazing) Huge potential for the plot so far and no real qualms with any of the character interactions so far Great at explaining the system and abilities What can I say? This novel is pretty awesome! ✌🏼

Beretta9
Beretta9Lv5Beretta9

Yeah great start and system choice as it will be fun to see where it goes also hope this doesn't end up like most dbz stories that never get done or fast enough releases harem is ok but maybe only up to 3 so as to not side track much of the story but still have him making many next gen sayians on earth

ChampionOfEternity
ChampionOfEternityLv3ChampionOfEternity

I simply love it, sorry about that spammer who made 4 accounts just to down your reviews 4 times. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Crook_Shank
Crook_ShankLv3Crook_Shank

It’s a good pass time Fanfic until chapter 50s. After that, it’s basically a cultivation novel one of the chinese wuxia thing. Clans and stuff you know.. So read it until chapter 53 and you can drop it.

PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3PUJIT_FADTE_9415

IF AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I WOULD REQUEST HIM TO CONTINUE PLEASE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

GQuasar
GQuasarLv4GQuasar

Good story, I can't wait for more chapters. ----------"-::'hxxhchfhhdcvvxbxbzb::-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"-"-"-"-"-""--""-"-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"'gdhdhdhdhdhdh

Quarantinne
QuarantinneLv4Quarantinne

Writing Quality: The writing in this book is good, not too advanced. I would say, for those who use this school system, around eighth or ninth grade level. It’s a little below where I read at, but I don’t mind. However it sometimes gets a little spotty, so 4 Stars. Writing Stability: Don’t even get me started... As of now, 7/1/20, the stability is worse than dogsh*t. Hopefully it gets fixed, as the author promised. 1 Star Story Development: The development of the story is pretty good. Nothing too much to complain about, the only thing I would complain about, though, is the fact it’s illogical to take in the two girls. 5 Stars World Background: As it’s based on one of my more favorite anime’s, I cant really fault the background much. It’s just... altered? kind of. 5 Stars Overall, I would say this book is a solid four, four and a half depending on the reader.

Calintz20
Calintz20Lv7Calintz20

Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️ Hope it’s not dropped. ❤️

AbsoluteCarnage
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I really love this fanfic. By far one of the best DragonBall fan fictions on the Web novel Web site. This novel has great pace, great plot, great main character and original characters, and wonderful grammar. Keep it up author.

MarMarc
MarMarcLv4MarMarc

I love this Fan-Fic and normally it has a good update speed but now after a long time Webnovel.com F*cks up and I can't read the latest chapter. (╬▔皿▔)╯

ShadowFlux1909
ShadowFlux1909Lv3ShadowFlux1909

can anyone els read this cuz i cant has this been taken down!? ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! 0909090909090090090909090909090909090909090909090909090909090909090909090909090909090900090909090909090909090909009090909009909090

tikller
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michael7022
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SlickTrick
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I've got to say, this is really good and I hope it never get dropped. I wanna see MC having kids Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

Everlasting_Queen
Everlasting_QueenLv3Everlasting_Queen

Please keep writing this and don't give it up!! This is very good and creative. The story so far is amazing I can't wait to see more as other him, raditz and goku team up. :) :). :) :) d:):):):):):)):):):):):):))::)):)::):)):):):):):):(:)):

matheus_alves
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Why did you stop writing WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

shiva997
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