Thanks.

well its the truth i always try to support good stories because its way too hard to find any decent ones

is he straight up evil tho or is it like he doesn't shy away from evil things to reach his goals

rreread it if you can handle evil stuff if not dont bother and dont try trash the fanfic by leaving a 1 star cuz u cant handle it if you like evil mc go and read im pretty sure you will like it

that literally didn't at all answer my question and who said i was going to leave a bad review if I didn't like it you have to respect the skill like writing a bad review because of the genre of the book so its quite annoying that you would assume that

i didmt assume it i just say that in almost all my answers in review section because mamy people do that also i did answer youre question you asked is it evil o said u should leave if you cant handle evil i think that makes it clear mc is ev

Since your a veteran reader that can spot garbage after 2 chapters try my novel out for a spin. You might like it. Harsh comments welcome. Novel name: unusual world.

sure i really read a lot

i would give it five stars bwcause its really easy to immerse yourself and almost no grammar issues i dont see anything wring the atory flows perfectly

thanks for your feed back and i hope you would leave an honest review if you really like the story.

i got some advice though which might impeove storie further like add a few really hidden conspiracies and curveballs if uget what i mean with really subtle hints only veterans can pick up so that new readers can get a surprise and veterans a small surprise and some things like that also im not the best at leaving reviews ill just say it has really good grammar i could spot only around 10 mistakes and perfect world building and stuff like that

thank you for you honest review of my story. also i wss fully planning on implementing hidden secrests but because of how the story is laid out i can only do so in my second volume.

true anyway make sure to like my review here lol