EternalMonarch

I kinda lost the will to write due to personal problems, maybe when the situation is taken care of.

I liked this story to a certain point, but u didn’t get the silmarillion at all, and the themes that makes the world of Tolkien so awesome, the epicness, the fight of pure good vs evil, etc. are all missing from the book, that’s why i can’t read anymore. Arda was not meant to be a grey world like elden ring, i see u are trying to fuse them but they are not compatible. I usually just drop and never review but you tried to write a fanfic of the 1st age and age of the trees, that’s commendable and awesome, so I wanted to point out the problems i saw. Good job anyway. As an advice, never mess with the soul of a world u are trying to write a story on, because the reason that world(original story) became popular was because of its soul and theme. Best example is LotR vs Rings of Power or WoW of 10 years ago vs now.

The last part of this episode had heavy AI in it, do not use AI.

I think the mc is 20 years old while harry is in the zoo accident that was the start of canon harry potter. So mc is 20 while hogwarts starts. He is 9 years older.

Absolutely perfect. If you drop, you are dead. I really liked it, it has huge potential. Good writing, decent character, interesting plot. I look forward to where it will go. Please no harem, thanks. Choose one and stick with it. or if you want to try romance with different people, one at a time not 2-3 at once. Good luck.

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