The dialogues made it a pain to read because there's no punctuation marks such as comma's(,) for example and also the way he keeps calling girls his girlfriend (kisara) and tricking them into a relationship with him(shigure) by making them promise him just feels forced, then his half assed reason like and i quote 'I won't force them into a relationship with me, i just want to establish a connection between us' is just lame, also the way he managed to go toe-to-toe with apachai with weights and,survived and managed to remove the weights while being hit with the achai kick just does'nt make sense because he came out unscathed, frankly, the romance feels forced, the dialogue is a pain and the masters became stupid and did'nt even question how the mc got that strong and did'nt question how the hell he could control ki since a young age is just lazy writing as deadpool would say it..i'll still read it for the heck of it of course and the plot course is still the same, the only difference is a far stronger kenichi and a harem...that's it...honestly?...i'm surprised it's this high, must be because its a harem and the sytem's rigged..
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