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Supe3rman1234
Supe3rman1234Lv35yr
2019-07-02 04:16

Il faut que tu continues cette histoire Certes tu as un peu rapide développement du personnage en oubliant certains moments mais oh rien c'est trop tard maintenant en plus j'ai vraiment commencé à prendre goût à cette histoire et je veux vraiment savoir comment ça fini alors alors s'il te plaît continue👍🙏

(Dropped) Boku no Toraburu

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