I've read the author's first work(now on hiatus though), and this is startlingly quite different from it. Congratulations on your improvement! There's only 9 chapters at the current moment, so I can't say much. The language used is beautiful. The author captures emotions very well. I'm very curious about how the MC is going to go against her mother. She's obviously very attached to her mother. There isn't a lot of character development so far, but then again it's still very early in the chapters. Instead, we are introduced to several distinct characters. The MC is a breath of fresh air. You can see that she grows up to be strong and fierce, yet she still has that slight irrational fear, just like a child. Child ver. MC is quiet and adorable, a stark difference from her grown up self(or so it seems). Update more please!
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