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2019-04-27 10:40

My review would be the 10th one. So now you're rating will be visible to all. 😎😎😎😎😎 Coming to the story. Your story had a great potential and it is visible after reaching first few chapters itself. Full credit for that. You have build the characters well. I have fallen in love with the FL. Well saying anything more will be like a spoiler. The way you have shown in the present and the way you are now showing her growth and transformation from the past is really commendable. Since it's new and has a few chapters, I am not going to comment anything on the stability of updates and all because I know you have the potential to do it. And one final note more -> You have amazing writing skill. Don't you dare drop the novel. It now stays in my library. Keep Writing!!! Love Love

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noctifer
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THANK YOU!! Finally I have a rating now, so congrats on being my 10th reviewer! I will definitely not drop this. I'm so glad you enjoy it, I couldn't stop smiling after I read your review.

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Keep rocking !!!

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