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RandomGuy
RandomGuyLv45yr
2019-09-24 00:10

Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work, author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too 😊 My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705

Way to the heavens

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Zwe_Nay_Kha_Znk_0102Lv1

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WithJ
WithJLv11

The writing overall could use some improvements, especially the author should look out for run-on sentences which I found quite a lot of throughout the posted chapters. Author might want to pay attention to the use of tenses as well for there were switches between past vs present. Despite the grammar errors, it was understandable and easy to follow the premise of the story. With respect to the plot development, it is moving at a reasonable speed. There seems to be action in every chapter so it is something to keep the readers on their toes about. The characters continues to be developed as the story moves along. Since the story is still fairly new, more character and plot development is expected to happen. If you are a fan of cultivation type stories where the MC is an underdog then give this a try.

5yr
Tinalynge
TinalyngeLv15

There were 24 chapters by the time I made this review. Writing Quality: The story flows nicely, and there are not many grammatical errors. It is written well, and although I am not a big fan of reading stories in present time, the writing is done very well. Stability of Updates: I read everything in one go, and have not been at a position where I had to wait for updates. However, looking at the table of contents, I think the stability is quite good. Story Development: The story is moving forward at a steady and simple pace. It is enjoyable and things happens all the time so the reader never gets bored, but at the same time you do not get rushed either. Everything has its own time and it is described well without being over the top. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out. The story is still fairly young, but the characters are already possible to be related to and they are very well written. World Background: The world is explained well, it is not intrusive in the writing but flows alongside the story. The details are good and welcome but at the same time not over the top. You do not encounter any info dumps.

5yr
YourGrandma
YourGrandmaLv5

It is really a great novel with lots of potential. It is really refreshing to read since it has its own uniqueness compared to other martial spirit-themed novels. The flow of story is amazing and I love the organization of characters. It is a story worth reading. Keep working working hard, Author. God bless!

5yr
BRibbon
BRibbonLv10

I really enjoyed the world building aspect of it. Especially the origin myth at the beginning. It sounded like a real origin myth! The only comment I have is a bit grammatical, it seemes your tenses go in a couple different directions. But it didn't make it too hard to read! Over all still a good story. Keep it up!

5yr
zd4zaasa
zd4zaasaLv1

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

3yr
Async0929
Async0929Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4yr
xlntz
xlntzLv14

Good read. Good writing quality. Nice phasing. I like these kinds of stories. Has a lot of potential. Just need a stable update i suppose. Also nice naming sense. XD

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