Item: Way to the heavens
Rating: 4.6
Author: Tinalynge

TinalyngeLv155yr

2019-05-02 15:24

There were 24 chapters by the time I made this review. Writing Quality: The story flows nicely, and there are not many grammatical errors. It is written well, and although I am not a big fan of reading stories in present time, the writing is done very well. Stability of Updates: I read everything in one go, and have not been at a position where I had to wait for updates. However, looking at the table of contents, I think the stability is quite good. Story Development: The story is moving forward at a steady and simple pace. It is enjoyable and things happens all the time so the reader never gets bored, but at the same time you do not get rushed either. Everything has its own time and it is described well without being over the top. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out. The story is still fairly young, but the characters are already possible to be related to and they are very well written. World Background: The world is explained well, it is not intrusive in the writing but flows alongside the story. The details are good and welcome but at the same time not over the top. You do not encounter any info dumps.

Way to the heavens

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