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BRibbonLv105yr
2019-05-02 17:55

I really enjoyed the world building aspect of it. Especially the origin myth at the beginning. It sounded like a real origin myth! The only comment I have is a bit grammatical, it seemes your tenses go in a couple different directions. But it didn't make it too hard to read! Over all still a good story. Keep it up!

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