Item: One piece: DarkStar pirates
Rating: 4
Author: crazyspecter

crazyspecterLv145yr

2019-05-15 16:01

I like your story the only thing that I find irritating is the ghost gag and the Mc sometimes acting dense. I also think that you should improve his use of his powers and abilities : I think you are giving him many powers too soon and at the same time, without the Mc really knowing how to use /develop them in an efficient manners (or this is the vibe I get). Nevertheless thank you for your work... I am waiting for more chapters lol P. S. Could you add Robin as a pairing for the Mc?

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