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litlleSnake
litlleSnakeLv55yr
2019-04-03 08:27

Why Mc in fanfiction almost handsome?.. just make Mc that not handsome but have charisma or charm...dont aďd to many original character on his crew..it will make the story boring later ..just let the original story run... it will help ur story for a long run.

One piece: DarkStar pirates

DemonSect
4.5
39 Chs

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DemonSect
DemonSectAuthor

I made him handsome because Sin has a rare background. Most of the (Evil) Celestial dragons in the anime looks ugly, fat, etc.. But Sin I want him to be the exact opposite. Don't worry his enemies won't take pity on him because he is handsome. (It's not like all females of the world will fall for him) About the crew, it's hard to find strong canon characters who are strong yet great at their jobs. Law joined because I used the excuse of revenge, whit Perona, I changed the fact that the only have experience navigating, to a great navigator. Now I need a Cook and a sniper, it would be best if they were a mink and a Fishman.

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Hidase
HidaseLv4

Yeah right ? How could the MC is handsome , just make him disfigured and disabled or something , right ?

5yr
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DemonSect
DemonSectAuthor

Lol, I probably should XD

Hidase:Yeah right ? How could the MC is handsome , just make him disfigured and disabled or something , right ?
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AhmedAhmed
AhmedAhmedLv3

i think he has to be a litte handsome because you know (:)

5yr
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AhmedAhmed
AhmedAhmedLv3

i'm not a harem liker it's just that i want him to find a girl that really suits him...

5yr
Epaxx
EpaxxLv6

Like Shanks! Lost an arm but has the Dao of face. Badass.

Hidase:Yeah right ? How could the MC is handsome , just make him disfigured and disabled or something , right ?
5yr
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Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6

Didn't read the fic, but what's the problem with having a handsome MC lol? XD

DemonSect:I made him handsome because Sin has a rare background. Most of the (Evil) Celestial dragons in the anime looks ugly, fat, etc.. But Sin I want him to be the exact opposite. Don't worry his enemies won't take pity on him because he is handsome. (It's not like all females of the world will fall for him) About the crew, it's hard to find strong canon characters who are strong yet great at their jobs. Law joined because I used the excuse of revenge, whit Perona, I changed the fact that the only have experience navigating, to a great navigator. Now I need a Cook and a sniper, it would be best if they were a mink and a Fishman.
5yr
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senkii
senkiiLv6

hahaha

5yr
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VictoriousFighting
VictoriousFightingLv4

I would ask, where that Charm come from if the MC isn't handsome ?

5yr
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SyrnZero
SyrnZeroLv4

why heroines in anime always cute, adorable, sexy, and beautiful tho?

5yr
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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Fool was begging to make the main character disfigured 😑🤨 weirdo

5yr
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KAHUM* PERONA IS GAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!!! And I’m dead serious this **** ain’t funny, this is blatant betrayal and bull****. The mc is a egotistical fućk, and mind you, a useless FÛCK.

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Story is dropped, and new novel he started to rewrite this is also dropped. The writing style of the book was pretty bad, and world background unrealistic and has plot holes. Conversations switchbbetween : and ". Also scene switches with bunch of _ andtitle which ruined the flow. Was bland to, idk how this is above 4.2 at the very least Buf at least if u dont care and want naruto onepiece mix here ya go.

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