I cannot spot any errors or irregularities with grammar. So far the story is intriguing enough that it does not bore me a single bit. Here is my verdict about the story. So far the writing quality is superb. No flaws or mistakes I can see, everything is well written. The story and idea flows well and is well conveyed. The plot is also good, in the eighth chapter I can see that there's a lot of going on even without dumping a lot of information. All I can say is that the story is well detailed and explained that I can understand the flow of the story. Characters is also well detailed, their traits and character can be seen clearly. If there's a thing like dimensions in novel writing, I can clearly see them in 3D. Very well detailed indeed. World Background is also good, it is well explained and you can get a gist about how the world works. Both from the heaven and the mortal realm, you can really define the difference between worlds. All in all, the verdict I gave is perfect five. Everything in this story is just perfect. I never got tired of reading and it is really easy to read and understand. I have a lots of fun reading this story. I swear I got hungry by just reading the details of the cooking done by the ML of the story. That's all for my review, and added the story to my library!
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thank you so much for the review! <3
