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Allen_Clay012

Allen_Clay012

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2019-05-16 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0122 days ago
    Posted

    In reading the first ten chapters. I see that this story has a lot of action. As it progress further it moved from one battle to another. The fight scenes are well detailed and not too flashy. Overall, the pacing has no problems it moves the story forward and at a steady pace. The world building is good as well, it reminds me of stories that uses Norse Mythology in its lore. The story is fun to read and is action filled. I recommend this story to those who is fan of Norse inspired stories and games like God of War: Ragnarok or Skyrim, Thor and the like. Thank you for introducing your story to me author. I appreciate reading your work.

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0123 days ago
    Commented

    This is an interesting story. I liked what I read so far.

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0123 months ago
    Replied to Helixj

    I'll try to fix this issue. Maybe lengthening the chapter should suffice...

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0123 months ago
    Posted

    I rate this story five stars because it deserves to be rated that way. It has interesting concepts of a power system which is unique and new. The cultural addition to the story too piqued my interest. It is well woven into the story making a well defined narrative. I will check this story from time to time and add it in my collection. Thank you for introducing your story to me. It is a good read!

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0127 months ago
    Posted

    First Impression This story is relatable to my childhood anime shows. It is similar to that famous shoujo school girl sailor student anime shows. It is a fun read, I recommend this story if you are interested with the genre. In depth review I never thought that this story was a fanfic. The premise is way original and the way the story unfolds is different. Although there were elements I see which were similar to an anime I saw. I found this story standing out. The pacing was fine, not overwhelming and gives us time to digest what the story was all about. The character was relatable also, with the character's perks being likeable as well. Lastly, the writing quality is good. It's detailed and describes the scenes well. Closing I had fun reading this story. I see that the author is dedicated in writing. To the author, keep up your good work. There's a lot in store for you and this story.

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0127 months ago
    Commented

    Thank you for introducing to me your story. I will read nine chapters more to continue with the review.

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0127 months ago
    Replied to zachycards

    Thanks for pointing this out. I will edit this error.

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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay01210 months ago
    Posted

    Overall This work has a good story and I won't spoil it. The plot is interesting and the flow of the story is good. It is very readable and the author has a good grasp of storytelling. The pacing is fine, not too fast or slow. Pros Action packed, well paced and has a good MC. Not too overpowered, but can fend for himself if needed. MC is good natured and likeable. Cons MC was too submissive, but I can understand because of his circumstances. He lived in a world where humans are not the top of the food chain. Others Reminds me of Conan the Barbarian or Berserk. Sadly, the MC just faced overwhelming odds against his favor.

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay01210 months ago
    Posted

    I cannot help but praise the author of the skill displayed in writing this novel. This is not the usual stuff you read in this platform. This story is one of the best I read. Also, the chapter update is solid I believe that this work will reach a milestone within the suceeding months. Keep writing, you have made a good work. It only needs exposure!

  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay01210 months ago
    Commented

    This is a work of art! I salute you for your writing. 👌