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Allen_Clay012

Allen_Clay012

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2019-05-16 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121d
    Posted

    There’s a lot of good stories recently, I say this book is one of them. I can see the potential, and this book would soon become popular. This work is also easy to read and understand. The main character has his own persona which positively drives the story. I recommend this book, this is well written. Sincerely, Allen_Clay012

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    REBORN WITH VENGEANCE SYSTEM
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121d
    Commented

    I can tell this work is good. Will definitely leave a good review!

    Ch 4 A PENALTY OR A REWARD
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    REBORN WITH VENGEANCE SYSTEM
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0122d
    Commented

    Intriguing

    Ch 1 ECHOES OF DESTINY
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    REBORN WITH VENGEANCE SYSTEM
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay01223d
    Replied to FuguFish

    Actual goat used for decoys due to the sounds they make.

    "We still have time," I calmly commented, contemplating my options. "I could employ my summon. Meroh the goat would serve as an excellent decoy," I mused to myself, considering the tactical advantages at my disposal.
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay01225d
    Posted

    Hello, this is the author. Let's ignore the ratings and move on to what I have to say. To those who read as far as the locked chapters, I would like to thank you guys! Your interest and support inspired me to continue writing this story. That's all that I wanted to say, to the readers of this story. Don't worry, I'll continue writing until I finish this story. I will do my best not to drop this story. Thank you for reading and good day!

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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to Stephan_Chiclet

    This is the FP limit, if MC uses an ability it temporarily uses FP. For example, if an ability costs 10 FP the counter will say [25/35 FP available]. After a skill's cooldown, the 10 FP will be refreshed returning to [35/35 FP]. If there's a need for clarification please let me know.

    Total Focus points remaining [35/35]
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to Stephan_Chiclet

    Thanks for asking this question, the focus points indicated refers to the focus points the MC can grow and maintain. For example, his FP right now is [35/35] it may grow at a rate of 70 points at level 10. Therefore at level 10, he will have [105/105] FP. To make things simple also, here is how FP works. If FP used is 80 to 90 percent it will take a heavy toll on the MC's psyche and may strain him. It may affect his decision-making abilities and his reaction speed. As the FP refreshes after the cooldown, it will free up the used FP enabling the MC to use another ability and free some strain in his head. If you got any questions please feel free to ask! Thank you! :)

    Focus: 7/10
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Commented

    Nice prologue, liked it!:)

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    My Clinic In Another World
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to xXSpiderGamingXx

    Thank you very much!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to MyCatLovesMe

    Thank you, very much for your support! Don't worry, I will make sure to deliver the best content I could.

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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    Interesting and complex story. For now, the MC doesn't stand out that much but the author shouldn't need to worry. A underwhelming MC can be fixed with character growth in the later chapters. Overall I don't find the story confusing but rather an ingenuine attempt of creativity and originality. Here is how the story goes so far: MC had issues with family and school. He suddenly met a god whom he mocked and forced the MC to transmigrate to different bodies of characters from different stories. I will add this story to my library. This story has potential.

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    Sinner Reincarnation
    Fantasy · drunken_angel
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    First thing I noticed is the chapter length. It's one of the shortest I see in this platform but the advantage I see is the ease of readability. It seems like the author intentionally made this short and cut down chapters to several parts. Although an interesting concept, its not conventional compared to most works. The story itself is intriguing, with the return of the devil and his conquest to rule the mortal realm. Featuring of different gods from several mythologies and religions in the world, this is an interesting concept. The story holds a good potential. I am giving this story a perfect 5/5 score due to the author's ingenuity and creativity. Thank you for inviting me to review your work. I will add this to my library!

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    God of Humanity
    Fantasy · NoveListsArts
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    The chapters are long enough and are written well. There's no confusion with the transition or the pacing. It goes well with the narrative. The author has made a good story. I will keep this story in my library to see how this story go. I am excited to see the next chapters. Thank you for introducing this wonderful work. Wish you best in your writing!

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    MARSHAL ON THE LOOSE
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    Reading at chapter 10, the story is intriguing as you follow Marlene's journey in a cyberpunk world. Here are what I have observed, the chapters seemed short . Despite being short it is descriptive enough to describe the scenes. Its not a bad thing for me but other readers may find it lacking. The story is very engaging, it has a good flow and you can clearly picture out the scenes precisely. There was no dragging chapters, just pure action. I enjoyed this story very much. I am giving this story 5/5 rating because this story depicts Cyberpunk action and the author faithfully described the setting and the characters very well. Thank you for inviting me to review your novel. I wish you the best!

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    Rogue Element [Cyberpunk]
    Sci-fi · Ryker_Bale
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    The formatting is good which enables readers to differentiate from each scenes. The style is effective but I believe the separation of the scenes could be done with one or three spaces. Other than that I have no issues with the writing style. I find the story easy to read and understand. It is interesting to see the future events as the plot unfolds. I will not try to spoil readers, all I can say that the story has a good charm into it. I am rating the story 5/5 for its good storytelling. The issue I pointed out earlier was nothing serious. for a traditional reader they may find it different to the format they used to read. Grammar wise thus story has no problems with it. Thank you for introducing me your work. I appreciate it.

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    Tales of the Vampires
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to Seraphin07

    mr.clay_33811

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Replied to Seraphin07

    sure

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
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    The Elven Lord's Awakening
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0121mth
    Posted

    I'm going to give this story a 5/5 rating. No bias toward the work of my countryman but I find the narrative, grammar, and concept as perfect. The story unfolds about a man who witnessed a strange phenomenon that unlocks his latent potential. Due to this, he was dragged into a world of magic. The story has good pacing and as well as references to Harry Potter style magic. This book is a good read and I recommend it to everyone! Thank you author for introducing your work to me!

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    APOKALYPSIS: Lost Magic Awakening
    Fantasy · KuyaImbo
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0122mth
    Replied to B_l_a_n_k_2167

    Thank you for your feedback. I am still editing most of the chapters. Don't worry I will have those issues you mentioned fixed. I appreciate your words, thank you!

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    The Genesis Trilogy
    Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
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  • Allen_Clay012
    Allen_Clay0122mth
    Replied to Inemin

    Your work is fine but it is in my part about the confusion thing. No need to make extra efforts to make readers like me understand. I'll read your work again and add this story to my library. That way I can read your work from time to time. I'll tell you my feedback in the comments section.

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    Half me and half...
    Fantasy · Inemin
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