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lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv31yr
2023-07-11 01:08

Not a bad fanfic, but Mc's character is not really fleshed out even in 50 chapters he seems jolly sometimes, some times manipulative, sometimes tries to get the heroines proactively, sometimes just not do anything. Moreover mc just goes on about how he can't win directly against the protagonists, I mean I get it already no need to remind that so many times how great protagonist is. It's like you really can't predict what mc would do next there. Well that being said i have only read 50 or so chapters so i can't say for sure but i have read other novels of this author and this one is definitely a step down from those in terms of mc's personality. I think in order to make a complex personality character author is making his personality more confusing.

Tanuki Rise of the Yokai Clan

akikan40
4.7
313 Chs

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Emptyentity
EmptyentityLv13

Akikan, your work is as awful as ever. Keep up with it! ..............................................................................

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Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1

His story quality fic going down 👎 I feel sorry for the real fan of his work .........,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

insta spam 5star if its akikan . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . ., . . . . . . . . . .

1yr
Khaos_Dgnrate
Khaos_DgnrateLv4

Nice, glad you make another one. .......

1yr
sailesh0
sailesh0Lv2

Hey buddy,normally I love your writings but what's wrong with this one?It is sounding like one of those racist Chinese novels.Please take care of that.Aside from that everything is awesome as always.😊

1yr
Cupcake123
Cupcake123Lv2

Honestly, this has to be one of my favorite fanfics I have ever read. The writing quality of this fanfic is good; however, their only a few grammar mistakes. The stability of updates is also excellent since we don't have to wait so long for a chapter. Although the story development is harem cliche, I love the main character's greedy personality. Undoubtedly, the world background is also good. So, I would certainly recommend reading this masterpiece. Spoilers The only thing I didn't like was the main character jumping from one world to another and leaving his Harem. It would be nice if the system had an update once he reaches a certain number of harem members. Also, I wanted Rimuru to be a trap lover for the MC, but I guess the author is not into those things.

1yr
Asta_4626
Asta_4626Lv11

@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.

1yr
I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13

I can see where this is going FIC MC will be like Sasuke and Fate Cuckold MC will be Naruto. They'll fight and eventually share the harem together then live forever ever after. The end. Great fic. Saw the ending. Im out

1yr
Pix3L
Pix3LLv4

Another doormat mc from akikan with no character development keep it up!

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