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Asta_4626
Asta_4626Lv111yr
2023-09-17 19:34

@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.

Tanuki Rise of the Yokai Clan

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Emptyentity
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Akikan, your work is as awful as ever. Keep up with it! ..............................................................................

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Mirio_kun
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His story quality fic going down 👎 I feel sorry for the real fan of his work .........,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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Unpaid_FoxGod
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insta spam 5star if its akikan . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . ., . . . . . . . . . .

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Khaos_Dgnrate
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Nice, glad you make another one. .......

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sailesh0
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Hey buddy,normally I love your writings but what's wrong with this one?It is sounding like one of those racist Chinese novels.Please take care of that.Aside from that everything is awesome as always.😊

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Cupcake123
Cupcake123Lv2

Honestly, this has to be one of my favorite fanfics I have ever read. The writing quality of this fanfic is good; however, their only a few grammar mistakes. The stability of updates is also excellent since we don't have to wait so long for a chapter. Although the story development is harem cliche, I love the main character's greedy personality. Undoubtedly, the world background is also good. So, I would certainly recommend reading this masterpiece. Spoilers The only thing I didn't like was the main character jumping from one world to another and leaving his Harem. It would be nice if the system had an update once he reaches a certain number of harem members. Also, I wanted Rimuru to be a trap lover for the MC, but I guess the author is not into those things.

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I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13

I can see where this is going FIC MC will be like Sasuke and Fate Cuckold MC will be Naruto. They'll fight and eventually share the harem together then live forever ever after. The end. Great fic. Saw the ending. Im out

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Pix3L
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Another doormat mc from akikan with no character development keep it up!

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