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AndellOfficial
AndellOfficialLv135yr
2019-04-05 18:13

Reading the title and then reading this may cause some confusion but this is one of the best written work that I have read on this site. The character development in this novel is well above the average that can typically be found in originals, and even many other professional works. As of now the updates are consistent and you can very easily feel the care that the author puts into the work and the devotion with their fans by the regular contact that can be on the discord channel trying to improve the story at all possible points. The characters begin with interesting interactions and they are constantly built up to give more of a personal feel where it seems like you or someone you know could be in that position and have conversations with them that feel real. The MC is a bit of a scoundrel in the view of society but I love characters like him in novels and can't really find any objectionable points (but I'm a huge S so that alone might discount my POV). The women are interesting and when you think about the magic that they are under their actions are all fairly believable without huge jumps in logic that you can find in other works like where the MC r.a.p.e.s a female lead and for no reason she ends up with Stockholm Syndrome by the time they finish. The world building has only just begun but the map of the world and a general understanding of etiquite and culture be seen under construction. I have no doubt that if the autor contiues with the current work for the rest of 2019 then this will turn into an absolute masterpiece among any group of webnovels. (First review I've ever written so I'm not sure how good it is or if my point gets across well, but basically, MUST READ is the only way to describe this novel)

Profane Prince of Domination

Devil_Paragon
4.8
584 Chs

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Cawcaw
CawcawLv4

Haven’t read the novel and skimmed through your review so I’m ready for any surprises!

5yr
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Leonora_Magaling
Leonora_MagalingLv3

Its nice even sexy its just that whats up with that princess consort nonsense and a man ruling the world aret ya ambitious

5yr
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timepiece94
timepiece94Lv14

I agree it has a lot of potential

5yr
Sadras
SadrasLv5

Harem, Harem, Harem, Harem,

5yr
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timepiece94
timepiece94Lv14

I agree with everything just want more

5yr
R01_CN0
R01_CN0Lv2

Use the force... said all the mistresses he stole. If you know what I mean. Konrad is the master of the lightsaber.

5yr
R01_CN0
R01_CN0Lv2

Use the force... said all the mistresses he stole. If you know what I mean. Konrad is the master of the lightsaber.

5yr
1
R01_CN0
R01_CN0Lv2

Use the force... said all the mistresses he stole. If you know what I mean. Konrad is the master of the lightsaber.

5yr
Sasuka69
Sasuka69Lv11

Haremmmmmm

5yr
Sasuka69
Sasuka69Lv11

Haremmmmmm

5yr
Crowq
CrowqLv13

,

Sasuka69:Haremmmmmm
5yr
Crowq
CrowqLv13

,

Sasuka69:Haremmmmmm
5yr
Daoist534697
Daoist534697Lv4

Good novel

5yr
Daoist534697
Daoist534697Lv4

Good novel

5yr
Daoist534697
Daoist534697Lv4

Good novel

5yr
rahul_pradhan
rahul_pradhanLv2

Sure

5yr
rahul_pradhan
rahul_pradhanLv2

Sure

5yr
David_Carty
David_CartyLv4

No it's a great novel

Daoist534697:Good novel
5yr
dagoc
dagocLv12

Agreed

4yr
dagoc
dagocLv12

Agreed

Leonora_Magaling:Its nice even sexy its just that whats up with that princess consort nonsense and a man ruling the world aret ya ambitious
4yr
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Devil_Paragon
Devil_ParagonAuthor

No, I'm not shameless. It is only shameless if it is not true and I dare say that if you know what you came for, my novel will provide you with entertainment and delightful surprises. Thus, I give myself five stars. (But really I'm just another shameless author giving himself five stars to boost his overall rating *yikes*)

5yr

BlissfulDeath
BlissfulDeathLv11

I think this story deserves an honest, detailed review so I will give it one. First, let's get two things out of the way. One: the mc tends to work on seducing girls he chooses and "rapes" those that try to kill him. Two: The author didn't do himself justice by saying "you can expect a lot of smut, comedy, and face-smacking" because while it is true, there is so much more. Writing Quality: Excellent. If you've navigated the sea of horrifying grammar most webnovel authors have to offer, you will be pleasantly surprised to see here someone who actually knows how to use the English language to produce an enjoyable reading experience. Stability of Updates: It speaks for itself really. I don't think you will find many authors out there doing better than this. At least one chapter a day, and you might get surprised with more. Story Development: The beginning was a bit rushed. And in my opinion, it seems that rush was more of a method for the author to show what he was capable of in terms of writing to pull in the readers. I might be getting ahead of myself by saying that, but the steady pace past the sixth chapter seems to indicate that. Character Design: Let's face it. When you sign up for this kind of novels, you don't expect much in those areas. But I was pleasantly surprised to see that all the principal characters are well fleshed out and have defining traits (the first girl, in particular, proves to be the most interesting in the latest chapters. But again, that's my opinion). World Background: And that's one of my favorites. The author seamlessly mixed German and Chinese culture (with some personal tweaks) to build his fantasy world. There is no large info dump, and things are revealed in a gradual process, when necessary. The interaction with the system is hilarious, but not the only source of comedy (it's the most entertaining in my opinion though). The main girls (those identified so far) don't just fall into his hands like puppets for no reasons. There are many surprises and political intrigues as the story develops. All in all, this is an entertaining read, and I shall keep following it.

5yr
lordjesus
lordjesusLv14

“You want sum fuk?” said the MC. “Yes” said the beautiful lady. And thus, they did the fuk. ....................................................

5yr
HentaiVeteran
HentaiVeteranLv4

Sex story? 5 star for me! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!

5yr
Aadivasi
AadivasiLv5

Badass anti-hero MC : Check Cruel and ruthless MC : Check Plot : Check Packed MC : Check S*x : Check O*gy : Check M*ther f*cking : Check

4yr
Clwxui
ClwxuiLv6

Fuck 140 characters

5yr
Agent_Xenon
Agent_XenonLv4

Very Nice novel xD. Alot better than Dual Cultivation and has an even more potential than that novel. BTW, Author, if you want a good cover for the novel, just search 'Anime Incubus' or 'Hot Incubus'. It may sound gay and the search itself may be gay, but I think there should be a picture there that would be suitable as a cover and as a good visual representation of the MC. Im not gay tho.

5yr
BadKrow
BadKrowLv5

You might not know me, but paragon does. Why you might ask? I'm the person who convinced him to change the cover and title of the story! Outside of a lot of authors paragon has managed to create a story that has real plot despite being r-18. Hell he could probably turn his novel into a eroge at this point that is how fluid his story has become. He plans out his story before he writes them. The pacing in the story has improved and he is able to constantly keep us on our toes which makes us want to read even more! The best part is hes able to update daily despite his busy schedule. I don't have much negative things to say, mainly because if I find something that might be a potential plot-hole he always able explain his train thought and tells me I just need to wait several dozen chapters to get my answer. If there is something I'd nitpick on is the fact he still hasn't dedicated a few chapters to that milf orgy he promised me. *cough cough*

5yr
Daswagster
DaswagsterLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
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