timepiece94

biggest problem is after reading the first chapter I realize that it's like started halfway in the middle he's talking about some system and blood work you don't really understand what he's talking about and he can Frost I know the character I've seen the movie but the system he's talking about I don't know what he's trying to say because in the movie there was no system that Frost had that describes what the main characters talking about so I just need a little more information a little more description about what this system is exactly and transparent world is that the same transparent World from demonslayer anime or or is this different I just need a little more man other than that I really think it's good you've really got something I just wish I understood

how old is thena at this time?

what is the W for or it's meaning

I actually love the end to that it was touching up they get together but whatever so far so good

so does he only need the meteor shard the Kryptonite to transfer abilities or to calm the chaos or to hold the power or whatever or can he just do everything without the Kryptonite or the meteor shard

so does he not need the meteorocks to stabilize his condition anymore or his abilities can you just bring them in whenever he wants and just sort them out on his own or does he still need the Kryptonite or the meteor shower shards to stabilize his abilities

can someone remind me how many templates he has so far and who they are

has a lot of potential we need to work on keeping the name straight and making sure that you remember what kingdoms belong to who and stuff like that because you switching his name and the kingdoms every other chapter is driving me crazy other than that serious potential and I really like it and I could really get into it

stepped into Los Angeles what

so far I really like the story the only problem is the character's name I don't like those last names throne and I hate that his first name is Elaine I know you're trying to go el-ee-on or somthing but it reads the feminine ee-lain