timepiece94

who is Rebecca i took a break and don't remember.

first off I was interested for the first few chapters but then you made a huge change in the Naruto universe first of all they don't die using chakra or drain your life force you make it sound like this every time they use chakra or any kind of technique they're killing themselves or slowly draining their life force or energy and it sounds more like a cultivation Chinese novel than anything else so I'm out wish you luck in your story

I'm glad something happened it's been like 50 chapters and all he's done is read and explore the castle I'm just glad something happened finally

his ability in combat is not are impressive

he was called professor of Ninjutsu, not the goddess Shinobi, that was hashirama senju

if you can write a good one go for it if not avoid it or you can just go with what you like or what you think overall I love where this is going keep it up can't wait for more chapters

i love it. Just stay with it. This is your baby.

yes.