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ElderDragonLv155yr
2019-03-23 15:22

OP mc - check. System - check. Harem for those who like them - check. Post apocalyptic world - check. Add more if you like. My point is this novel is worthwhile to follow its development.

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AtIndo23
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The story is interesting, it's about a man that died and somehow wakeup in a new world that like his world(?). He have a game-like ability and a super power machine or robot that he can control freely. The writing is good and you can understand it easily. Stability of Updates is good too. One of the thing that I kinda hate, is there's only a little characters development, and even it's only the MC that have it. The harem is like a robot, and just there for the purpose of sexual intercourse, they are there only to satisfy the MC lust. I just hope the author give those girls more feeling and character development, than just to make them like ***-dolls or even ***-robot. Like, give them some back-story or have them jealous at each other, or something like that. We need more feeling from them!! And more feeling from the story itself!!! For world background, it's good enough for me, to understand what happen, why it happens, or where it happens, in that world. One thing that I also hope for the author to do, is to give the other characters do more talking. It's feels empty if only the MC or the characters near the MC that the only people that talks. Also, the last one, I hope you didn't make the MC too depents on his op skill that he forget to train his body more. It's not like he always have that skills, right? I mean, some of the skills still have a cooldown, right? What if he use all of them and their cooldown is running, when a really powerfull enemy in front of him? That's all, maybe the rating I give is low than most rating in this novel's review, but I really can't put all five stars even if I want to. Because I hope the author will realize the error in this novel and fix or improves it in the later chapter. Thanks.

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