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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv145yr
2020-04-13 22:27

It's an alright story however I have some problems with it that I can't stand tbh First, I get its a harem novel but will it kill someone to acc make them useful instead of just sitting around while the mc does everything ? It's like he will just go around making a little collection... Also, what is with everyone's fcking hero bs. If you were trying to survive in that world why would you enter the nest of hundreds of mutant beasts for a girl you met once. WHILE YOU HAVE YOUR OWN SISTER TO LOOK FOR. I don't mind him helping people LATER ON when he acc has his priorities straight and has the skills to back It up. Say he is good with weapons, hand to hand etc Literally the first thing he says to the girl is that they can only stay for a day as to not get overrun and that he still has to get his sister so he cannot be stuck/die there. Next couple of chaps ? Heads straight into the fcking nest... Really want to read a proper story of what someone would do, make it realistic ffs (I get he has a superpower but you know what I mean) Finally, it's just my preference but why tf is the girl calling him brother etc ? Is it their culture ? cause from where I am calling a girl who you have an interest for sister and her calling you brother is weird af. Like, imagine your gf calling you brother...

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Tonyorobsky
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1- The girls have their use, not necessarily combat oriented. The elder is driver-assistant while the younger is more fighter-scavenger 2- He instructed his sister to secure herself in her room with supplies. No direct danger for her 3- Getting a mutant core at that time was a calculated risk. He weakened them before getting in 4- The brother thing is cultural 5- The story can’t always be realistic. Sometimes you have to bend or break some things (deliberately or by mistake)

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