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Wolfistien123
Wolfistien123Lv54yr
2020-10-05 01:08

It's just the repeat of same thing again and again. like he does something (going somewhere, trading, walking around) and there are people trying to kill him like every fucking person are his enemy or something. Or he roams around and suddenly find someone injured or dying, then he helps them if they are male then he helps them and that's it but if they are female then they fall in love then confesses to each other then share a kiss then something happen and they seperate from each other and while all this is happening he gets too strong secretly but looses all his power due to that something and then finds a new way to get stronger and then repeat. There is more that is he learns something new and then when he gets into fight he suddenly couldn't use it because author doesn't want it. And he teaches people around him godly techniques but he himself has learned but never used them as if his fist and simple sword moves are better than those techniques. Well I have only read around 120 chapters so far so I don't know if it gets better later but I am already fed up with it so I am dropping it for now until I am bored enough to read it again.

The Geared Immortal

Shynobi
4.2
1459 Chs

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Sun_moon
Sun_moonLv6

I keep skipping to the end of storyline, maybe mc will meet his love. Nope, mc just got thrown into next storyline. It really make me feel worse, mc help new friends really well but left his love one at home and dont even bother to go home. When they meet, mc is fighting current boss and win but got beat to half dead and got flung to other place.

1yr
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Wolfistien123
Wolfistien123Lv5

Thanks for replying now i am pretty sure i won't pick it up again.

1yr
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Daoist_ParadoxLv4

1) The concept is such that it has a lot of scope. The MC can create all kinds of stuff like modern appliances, mystic tools used by cultivators, military weapons, instruments which combine modern and cultivation techniques (such as a very low altitude satellite or a drone, etc). In short, just about anyone one can imagine, and its selling point is the part where MC astonishes others with his superior instruments. 2) The MC can be shown to occupy a no man's land, which he develops into some kind of organisation like a clan, sect, company, kingdom or empire. 3) The MC can win multiple battles against other individuals or organisations, with his superior instruments and modern knowledge. 4) The MC can woo many girls and ...(you know what I'm talking about) These were the possibilities, and I rated as such. Cons - 1) Writing is not fluidic. It doesn't feel smooth. Although I didn't find any major grammatical mistakes, the scene description feels broken. 2)The author is totally not good at writing romance. All romance scenes are cheesy, however they are not unbearable. 3) The MC does not feel ambitious. No signs of organisation building. It won't be interesting to read the MC living like Tarzan in the forest. 4) There is no awesomeness factor in MC's cultivation technique. It is kind of boring. ** I've written such a long review as I have a lot of expectations from this web novel.

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DriedSnug
DriedSnugLv14

Lest make this review: 1-We have an interesting world, you get a point +1. 2-Main character is a suppose super spy and genius, but it seems he forgot his brain in the other world -1 point. 3-Characters don’t learn from there mistake and keep making the same mistake, -1 point. 4-The introducing modern technology into this type of story is interesting, +1 point. 5-The over used trope of rich arrogant young master is annoying, -1 point. 6-The Mc has a constant change in personality that is confusing at time, -1 point. 7-The writing/grammar is good and understandable, +1 point. Okay we started at 5 if we calculate all, all the point this is our real review and our final score is 4 out of 10.

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

The novel is almost perfect. ALMOST, and unfortunately the not perfect part is the MC which is a huge part. I am at chapter 18, and the MC lacks brain function. He almost died once from eating beast meat, to much energy, makes sense. Second time he found a stronger beast and same thing AGAIN, almost died, he is not stupid he just lacks the brain capacity to think: weak best=strong energy, stronger best=stronger energy. If it was earth he would be the stupid kid that touches fire twice because it has different color and his brain could not make the connection. Chapter 17 he lets potential rapists and murders (his age) go free (hell he even protects them from death) obviously later on they push him into a life and death situation. The NEXT CHAPTER he kills someone so so he will get directions to a village (simplified of course, no spoilers). OP MC is ALWAYS <<<<< competent smart MC. I only bother writing the review because how disappointing it is, this could have been 4.6/5 easily with a slightly better MC, no need for perfect.

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Neigh007
Neigh007Lv5

The Novel itself isn´t bad. But at the Middle 100+ Chapters the Story goes From 4-Stars for me to 3,5-Stars. Now i skipped a few Chapters to look if the Story gets better, but only got More Frustrated. Its like the Author WANT´S to have the MC be Hurt/Busy so that he doesnt go back to his Girlfriend/Familie. I can guess what will happen when MC get´s finaly back only to get Hurt again by his Girlfriend. That is why i Dropped it. The Whole Cultivation of the MC is around chapter 70+ Not more mentioned, till something Big happens. Well if you are a Fan of Harem, then this Novel isn´t for You. If you are a bad Drama Fan then it is something for you.

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I_love_magic
I_love_magicLv10

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Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

Had a lot of potential but mc has trash character that doesn't fit his background things go down hill really fast around chapter 4! kept reading hoping it would get better but it just kept getting worse not for me good luck to all who want to read it.

5yr
NibaS
NibaSLv6

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5yr
PranayR
PranayRLv3

It was a great novel but when it reached the mistaken identity volume, I had to drop it. I might come back later and just skip over that volume but everything before that was pretty good.

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Tatsuya_Shiba_1326
Tatsuya_Shiba_1326Lv4

Well, I don't like this novel. Because MC is too soft-hearted. Examples: 1) enemy kidnaps the girlfriend of MC , but MC just warn and forgive the enemy. 2)in chapter 349, enemies tries to kill MC many time by using guns , but MC just again warn them. 3) then , even after getting warned, enemies again tries to capture the two women of MC , but again MC just warned enemies. 4)in same chapter, a young master of a clan attacks MC with shotgun. But MC just warn than man. But the young master of that clan says, " he'll get mc'women" and MC says, " come and try". Good novel became waste novel, because of the character of MC. I think MC is just waiting for worse to happen to his girls and himself. A true looser MC. Even a dog attacks a person , who tries to harm that dog. I am going for another novel.i had of this novel.

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