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Neigh007
Neigh007Lv54yr
2020-03-07 02:15

The Novel itself isn´t bad. But at the Middle 100+ Chapters the Story goes From 4-Stars for me to 3,5-Stars. Now i skipped a few Chapters to look if the Story gets better, but only got More Frustrated. Its like the Author WANT´S to have the MC be Hurt/Busy so that he doesnt go back to his Girlfriend/Familie. I can guess what will happen when MC get´s finaly back only to get Hurt again by his Girlfriend. That is why i Dropped it. The Whole Cultivation of the MC is around chapter 70+ Not more mentioned, till something Big happens. Well if you are a Fan of Harem, then this Novel isn´t for You. If you are a bad Drama Fan then it is something for you.

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Daw_San_Myint
Daw_San_MyintLv10

Like NTR?

Neigh007
Neigh007Lv5

This Novel did give you the Feeling of NTR later. But from what i read NTR didnt happen.

Daw_San_Myint:Like NTR?
Xerathyon
XerathyonLv5

100% agree. That whole ntr section and stopping his journey home for no goddamn reason. It only becomes worse with the convoluted plot lines afterwards.

Xerathyon
XerathyonLv5

I would recommend to just stop reading at chap 122 or 162.

Xerathyon
XerathyonLv5

Mc cheats on the women who may be cheating him. Even though his whole personality is about never cheating. He just lets them go if they cheat on him. His character just gets deleted after c. 162.

Hydro89
Hydro89Lv15

Yeah, it felt like the mc plot kept jumping to differnt female characters and sometimes just pushed some aside for ages

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

thanks for your post and all the comments afterwards, i just dodged a bullet. there is nothing I despise more than cheating and ntr, just makes me feel sick

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