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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv55yr
2019-10-18 21:09

Cool idea, terrible execution. Horrible grammer. Its also so full of plot holes and unrealistic data that it just burns by eyes. Most of this data could be googled super easily. Such as the prices of things, distances and ages. Cultural settings as well.. Honestly it reads like an Indian version of Sheldon from big bang theory wrote this with raj his intelligence or lack there of. For what is supposed to be a art business type character... This really doesn't hit the nail

Rebirth 1973

Xandarx
3.4
64 Chs

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XandarxAuthor

I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.

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Typhoon256Lv5

Hello dear author as a reader I have to say that I liked the previous course of the story, a little advice as a reader is that you take your time to write each chapter and do not get stressed by the comments of some people so the story will be more fluid and concise. At the moment I have nothing more to say, so I look forward to this new beginning, my dear author.

5yr
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Nick_AldersonLv13

As a fellow author, I wish you luck with your remake. I hope you get everything out of it that you wish for. #RebirthofRebirth1973~~~~~~~~~~~

5yr
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TurkysLv5

Reveal spoiler

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yeutraLv5

Worst thing to hear it remake or rewrite it better to just write new novel... anyway what ya ETA? s

5yr
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theactivistno100Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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YaMETeKuDASaiLv2

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Lastnam35898984Lv2

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spaceman25Lv14

This book really makes sense because it doesn't have too much of everything,and I like the fact that the mc's plans are well structured and not in disarray

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