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2019-06-12 12:44

Started off with an okay premise and world. Quickly went to absolute crap with filler writing only a handful of chapters in and unnecessary peanut gallery comments that span half a chapter or more. Also, the law of the jungle is so ridiculously crazy when compared to other novels of this type that it actually hurts the whole society being successful enough to travel the galaxy thing the author is trying to portray. Those achievements could literally never happen and it just shows how stupid the author is. I’ve heard a lot from other reviews that this book gets incredibly racist within the coming chapters. Really disappointed.

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