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SKKEN
SKKENLv45yr
2019-05-26 22:15

I was enjoying myself, but then the story started getting rather long-winded. With this and the ****ty 'let's hear how the bystanders doubt the mc' meme, I'm just about done with this story. Thanks but no thanks, I decided I don't need this story anywhere near me. If you want examples, I'm too tired rn to give them, just read the first ~20 chapters if you haven't already and you'll notice it too.

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ArtistaFeel
ArtistaFeelLv4

Forget it A novel recommendation Give it a try "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it.

SKKEN
SKKENLv4

Also, if you read the other reviews and you see the five star ones... Those five star reviewers saying this is great are all factually incorrect about the quality of this, thing. I don't want to call it literature, as that would be an insult to quality novels. REEEEEEE

Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

This novel blows.... and not in a good way

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I really had to force myself to read the first ten chapters to give the story a chance. Like with The Strongest Gene, the “science” in this novel makes me feel like I’m bashing my head into a wall. One hundred percent does not equal 100% in this series. If you don’t understand a lick of science, then make the series pure fantasy! Amino acids and the function of turning genes on and off aren’t mentioned. Why aren’t viruses used for genetic modification? Did people from the future forget how to splice genes? Furthermore, if you’re in a clan, then isn’t there a good chance that you are related and share the same genes? Why are there “formulas” and “equations” for genes? I would have thought the translators chose the wrong term and wrote “gene” instead of whatever was meant, but DNA is specifically mentioned in the second chapter. The author’s ideas on evolution are… interesting, even if they don’t make a lick of sense. Pluto returned to being a planet. The complications of pioneering through space and colonizing various habitats with different gravities is completely left out. Also, the author seems to have forgotten about the planets in other galaxies and that everything in space is constantly moving and isn’t going to stay in one place. ….Why are math and the sciences classified as “literature” in this school? Just wtf… If something is going to be sci-fi, then actually make it sci-fi! There is no science to go along with all this fiction! This is a standard, painfully cliché transmigration story where the person from the past takes over the body of a loser in the future. As usually, the MC starts out quite weak and looked down upon by his clan, but he undergoes magical stat-boosting... There is nothing original here. At all. The story starts off with an information dump so heavy, I almost dropped the series in the first few chapters. This is definitely a series that “tells” the story rather than “shows” it. Impressively boring. Without establishing the character or giving the readers any interest in the plot, the MC just cultivates. That’s right—this may actually be a cultivation novel disguised as a science-fiction. As for characterization, there isn’t any. I guess the MC’s trait is that he’s hard-working? He was from our era, but nothing is revealed about his past life. There is no story or character design, and the background doesn't make a lick of sense. I feel bad for the translation team for having to read this. Not recommended.

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