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shelwyn
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2019-05-25 11:58

The story is actually kind of enjoyable, great quality and stable updates. The thing that really drags down the story is the author. He's a Chinese supremacist. I know a little can be fine and it can be funny at times but it's taken a too far in this novel. So readers beware, it's a nice novel but wow the racism becomes the plot line almost. Instead of fighting the common enemy he just wails on none han races. Oof.

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