Review Detail of Lomyril in Shadow Lord of DC

Seems a bit too random to me. The main character is adopted, but when his father dies he isn't sent back into the system despite being a minor. He eventually meets up with Johnathan & Martha Kent, but nothing is described about how they met. The Kents question him about Clark, but when our main character talks about Krypton they don't ask him how he found out about this knowledge.