Review Detail of Vistarion in Fire Mage
Review detail
It's a copy of Lord of mysteries, but author used RPG class system fused with mystic. It's original and interesting idea. The problem is author is not doing it properly, it don't feel like 1world it feels like 2world fused forcefully. The so called mystery in this novel don't feel like mystery, its more like author is throwing a lot of unknown characters at the reader and then solve them one by one(and the concept of numbered artifact is 100% copy of LoM). So I would call it confusing characters rather than mystery plot. I hope author don't take it wrong way. I like it! But I just wish it could be better so I can love it. (I hope novel with perfect fusion of RPG and Mystic of LoM happens sooner or later).
Fire Mage
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Okay, I will try my best and give it all. And yes, I do copy that artifact thing and I'm a fan of cuttlefish's work. But this story is completely different from the LOTM, and this is a completely different universe, so it's not a copy of Lord of the Mysteries. There is a big difference in everything. I'm just a beginner, so it will take time for me to write a novel like Cuttlefish, so there will be many loose ends. As for all those unknown characters, they all have their own purposes, you will see them in the next few chapters. If I tell more about it, then it won't be suspense at all... It will be a perfect fusion, so I won't let you guys down.
its not just the artifacts that are copied fromLOTM, the whole story feels like a LOTM rewiten in an RPG (forced) setting, even the story développement is the same. i love the LOTM setting so i read this novel ( more than a 100 chapters) but i felt like i'm rereading the LOTM its so frustrationg ....
