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Midnight_Gravity

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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity8d
    Replied to Thirty_six_Hours
    Ch 79 Chapter 79 Batman's Back
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    I Am Energy In Dc
    Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity8d
    Commented

    Take a page out of "Fated Villain" to learn how to write overpowered characters but still keeping the anticipation and tension, the MC's personality here is too wishy washy sometimes and he's constantly questioning himself then there's the whole repetitive emphasis on his actions like he's trying to convince himself of his own deliberate actions, I personally can't stand behind (pause, no Diddy) an MC that lacks conviction especially one that's supposed to be overpowered like this. If you're evil be evil if you want to be a savior then be one, constantly meandering around it like you're walking o eggshells is jarring (again) especially if you're this OP.

    Ch 79 Chapter 79 Batman's Back
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    I Am Energy In Dc
    Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity9d
    Commented

    what a drag

    Ch 5 Chapter 4
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    TBATE: The Emissary
    Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity9d
    Commented
    Ch 30 Chapter 30
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    Avatar The Legend of Korra: Ruthless Wind
    Anime & Comics · Marcus_Adderley
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity10d
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    you know the link for this translation original ?

    Without the inheritance of the Heavenly Desolate Emperor, he really couldn't compare to the other party. 
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    BTTH: Inheriting Desolate Heavenly Emperor
    Anime & Comics · ryuuji_7
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity10d
    Commented

    that guy also has his "grandpa"

    Without the inheritance of the Heavenly Desolate Emperor, he really couldn't compare to the other party. 
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    BTTH: Inheriting Desolate Heavenly Emperor
    Anime & Comics · ryuuji_7
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    Cursed energy is an aspect of spiritual power a negative aspect of a whole (the whole being spiritual power) there was no need to substitute Yuuya's original power for cursed energy you've downgraded it a lot, just my two cents though...

    Ch 19 Let's Train
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    In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
    Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    you really don't understand Kryptonians, downplaying Kal-El's power to this extent is laughable, if Saiyan's push through their limits each time, Kryptonians have no limits under the right star

    Ch 20 Chapter 20- Dawn of the League - Part 5
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    Journey of the Last Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · G009ps
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    stop using LLMs

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 - The Welcome - Part 2
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    Journey of the Last Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · G009ps
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    Saiyans at a power level of 5000 are more than enough to be planet busters yet here we have Super Saiyan Blue transformers afraid of a potential star destroyer a full on machine at that not even a sapient Android, where did you get your power scaling from?

    Ch 5 Chapter 5- The Prayer - Part 5
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    Journey of the Last Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · G009ps
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    "My girlfriend's girlfriend is my girlfriend too"

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    Avatar The Legend of Korra: Ruthless Wind
    Anime & Comics · Marcus_Adderley
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    wow what a drag, Super Saiyan Blue and they're scared of a star buster are you kidding me 😂

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Prayer -Part 1 (Updated)
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    Journey of the Last Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · G009ps
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Replied to Thirty_six_Hours

    meh

    IMAGE.
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    I Am Energy In Dc
    Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity12d
    Commented

    Curse energy is a negative aspect of spiritual power as a whole

    Ch 6 Not A Chapter
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    In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
    Anime & Comics · Dragon_7454
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity13d
    Commented

    The Twin Star Exorcists template would be dope

    Ch 2 Choices
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    In Jujutsu Kaisen As Tenjou Yuuya
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity15d
    Replied to _TheGodFather

    He didn't call you dumb, just what you said, yes there's a difference...

    Ch 2 Lost The Battle But Won The War But At What Cost
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    Meta Gacha Essence In DC
    Anime & Comics · _TheGodFather
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity16d
    Commented

    The useless info is real

    Ch 9 Chapter 9
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller
    Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity29d
    Commented

    Booooooo!!!

    Ch 15 Notice
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    Custom Made Archangel: The Rewrite
    Anime & Comics · Dr_Armstrong
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity1mth
    Commented

    Who is calling Neji a prodigy? Hinata's range far exceeded his own he was just better at utilizing the Byakugan, but when it came to potential he is painfully average.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
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    Naruto: Blood & Pleasure
    Anime & Comics · NexusPrimodius
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  • Midnight_Gravity
    Midnight_Gravity1mth
    Replied to aaronxlycan_8287

    The demon Prince rank makes sense but in CMDK it's more like a designation given to a pure blooded child of a Demon King, the Author never expanded on it as well (again) since he was in a hurry to end it, one of the many several plot holes.

    Ch -1 Angelic Hierarchy
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    Custom Made Archangel: The Rewrite
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