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2021-03-23 22:18

This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters, Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment, But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now), Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose), Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies, But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp) anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment, hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully) Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,) Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review. Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.

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Ak02
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Nah, I will be greatful if you point out those mistakes like the previous times. If there was someone to point out these mistakes when I wrote those chaps, I would have made MC to focus on the Main Class at earlier stage. At that time, there was not even one reader said anything about mc's decision, so I went with the flow. Only when I crossed chapter 30 did I realize that MC is relying too much on his previous life skills and trickster skills. Well, I can't change the written ones, but I can improve in the future chaps. Anyway, thanks man.

RAARguin
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So far I feel like his choices are in line with his established character and circumstances. I feel like that him relying on his past life skills is realistic in those earlier parts of the story since he haven't understood how the world power system works. Also when it's life or death situations one will automatically rely on what's the most reliable for them. It was also great to read that the MC learned and practice the new power system instead of automatically learning how to use them skillfully. So you've done a great job author.

Ak02:Nah, I will be greatful if you point out those mistakes like the previous times. If there was someone to point out these mistakes when I wrote those chaps, I would have made MC to focus on the Main Class at earlier stage. At that time, there was not even one reader said anything about mc's decision, so I went with the flow. Only when I crossed chapter 30 did I realize that MC is relying too much on his previous life skills and trickster skills. Well, I can't change the written ones, but I can improve in the future chaps. Anyway, thanks man.
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