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Glilly
GlillyLv25yr
2019-12-23 03:11

Let me just say, love the story, love the characters, the drama, the horror and gore, the OPness, and the romance between the ML and MC. I started reading this story months ago and at the time there wasn’t many chapters to get a feel of the story but now that I’m catching back up with it, I’m blown away with all of the plot twists and there were so many things I didn’t think would happen but it did. I’ve seen that people have been having problems with Ivery ( MC ), and I don’t get why, people are expecting her to be instantly OP and over matured from the start of the story when she literally doesn’t know what her powers are or what she can do and people also have a problem with her constantly asking Loki what to do, when that’s what he’s supposed to do, help her, answer her questions, she doesn’t know her powers and he does, he’s also there to teach her what her powers are and how she can use them, simple as that. I’d understand dropping the story if 1-80 chapters into a story, and the characters make no changes or simply gets worst, but people are dropping this story at chapters 1-5 because of the characters, which have and are already making changes in other chapters, most importantly, Ivery. Some people aren’t remembering that Ivery (MC) is still a teenager with a sad background if you made it to chapter 9. She still needs to mature as the author said, but some people don’t care about that because she’s supposed to know what to say and do automatically after being transported into another world, and having only the knowledge she had in her original life, the new world she’s in is totally different with different laws and different people, the normal in the world she’s in isn’t the same normal in the world she was used to. Some people don’t realize that she doesn’t know how to use her powers after she’s suddenly told she’s has magic and has no experience using magic, but because of that it makes her useless and weak because she didn’t learn how to use them? And some people are complaining that she’s always asking Loki what do to next, umm, maybe because he’s her magical GUIDE and she doesn’t know her powers and the world she’s and Loki does. MC is interested in a boy (ML) Luther, shes interested in him only because he has a handsome face and will do anything he asks her just because he’s handsome? Author even said, even if Luther had average looks, everything still would’ve happened the same way. She’s interested in him out of curiosity because she’s obviously never been in a romantic relationship before because of how her life was before I find it hard to believe she had time or the mental strength to be in a relationship, so things like that are foreign to her. She doesn’t get immediate revenge on the Emperor and Empress, so she’s stupid for that? Maybe it’s because if she went after the Emperor and Empress, it would’ve caused more problems than good, and keep in mind Ivery is still learning her powers, she didn’t learn any of her offensive powers yet when she encountered the Emperor so how was she supposed to kill him and the Empress, he obviously overpowered her when they first met. So what if ML kills other people that anger him or kills people that upset or target the MC. As long as he’s gentle and nice and continues to save and protect our MC that’s all that matters to me.

The Unwanted Princess

Calistal
4.6
123 Chs

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Glilly
GlillyLv2

I meant as long as he is gentle and nice to our MC, I know he’s not gentle and nice at heart to just anybody. And I know I mentioned Loki being her guide twice but 🤷‍♀️

5yr
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Calistal
CalistalAuthor

Thank you for your understanding!

5yr
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Lonefrostria
LonefrostriaLv4

Yeah that's true and also if you read further you would know the reason why the people without magical poweress are put in the hollow castle. Julian and Cassandra are completely innocent and they are not responsible for the all the execution of their own children. You read further and will get to know. There is no need to take revenge on them to!

4yr
2
Glilly
GlillyLv2

😁 Yes! You understand, some people just are so impatient and want everything to happen in just one chapter 😒 some people don’t even bother to try and understand the characters or the story and are quick to drop it when a character doesn’t do something they wanted the character to do in the early chapters like 1 through 5. They get upset about a character who’s adapting to a giant change and don’t even bother to see the character mature and get stronger, its better for the FL to be weaker in the earlier part of the story so we can witness her growth throughout the chapters, but apparently some people dislike that and want her to instantly beat up everyone on sight and be a cunning fox even though that’s not the type of person she was in her previous life\original body.

Lonefrostria:Yeah that's true and also if you read further you would know the reason why the people without magical poweress are put in the hollow castle. Julian and Cassandra are completely innocent and they are not responsible for the all the execution of their own children. You read further and will get to know. There is no need to take revenge on them to!
4yr
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fieryscarlett
fieryscarlettLv4

We just hv to hear n bear w different opinions from LITERALLY DIFFERENT individuals... W so many(infinite number)of brains out there, it is an impossible job to cater to everyone's opinions n favourites storyline... 🤔🤔🤔

Glilly:😁 Yes! You understand, some people just are so impatient and want everything to happen in just one chapter 😒 some people don’t even bother to try and understand the characters or the story and are quick to drop it when a character doesn’t do something they wanted the character to do in the early chapters like 1 through 5. They get upset about a character who’s adapting to a giant change and don’t even bother to see the character mature and get stronger, its better for the FL to be weaker in the earlier part of the story so we can witness her growth throughout the chapters, but apparently some people dislike that and want her to instantly beat up everyone on sight and be a cunning fox even though that’s not the type of person she was in her previous life\original body.
4yr
1
fieryscarlett
fieryscarlettLv4

We just hv to hear n bear w different opinions from LITERALLY DIFFERENT individuals... W so many(infinite number)of brains out there, it is an impossible job to cater to everyone's opinions n favourites storyline... 🤔🤔🤔

Glilly:😁 Yes! You understand, some people just are so impatient and want everything to happen in just one chapter 😒 some people don’t even bother to try and understand the characters or the story and are quick to drop it when a character doesn’t do something they wanted the character to do in the early chapters like 1 through 5. They get upset about a character who’s adapting to a giant change and don’t even bother to see the character mature and get stronger, its better for the FL to be weaker in the earlier part of the story so we can witness her growth throughout the chapters, but apparently some people dislike that and want her to instantly beat up everyone on sight and be a cunning fox even though that’s not the type of person she was in her previous life\original body.
4yr
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Glilly
GlillyLv2

You are 100% right. Everyone has different opinions and preferences and everyone sees things differently. I just wanted to rant about the readers that don’t give the story a chance or even try to see if the characters improve. I’m just speaking as a person who really enjoys this story. But if those readers had stuck around a little longer then maybe the problems they had when they dropped the story was resolved in further chapters. The author can only do so much to please all readers, sometimes it’s not easy to write a story that caters to your own preference and others preference, there’s always going to be people that dislike or hate what you create because that’s just how it is, so I get that everyone isn’t always going to like the same things, but you can’t grow to like something if you don’t give it a chance, and those readers that dropped the story let chapters 1-6 define the characters, when there’s 70+ chapters of story and character development. But in the end all authors need criticism in order to make their story better for other readers that share the same views.

fieryscarlett:We just hv to hear n bear w different opinions from LITERALLY DIFFERENT individuals... W so many(infinite number)of brains out there, it is an impossible job to cater to everyone's opinions n favourites storyline... 🤔🤔🤔
4yr
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fieryscarlett
fieryscarlettLv4

U r totally right...No objection there..👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😍😍😍

Glilly:You are 100% right. Everyone has different opinions and preferences and everyone sees things differently. I just wanted to rant about the readers that don’t give the story a chance or even try to see if the characters improve. I’m just speaking as a person who really enjoys this story. But if those readers had stuck around a little longer then maybe the problems they had when they dropped the story was resolved in further chapters. The author can only do so much to please all readers, sometimes it’s not easy to write a story that caters to your own preference and others preference, there’s always going to be people that dislike or hate what you create because that’s just how it is, so I get that everyone isn’t always going to like the same things, but you can’t grow to like something if you don’t give it a chance, and those readers that dropped the story let chapters 1-6 define the characters, when there’s 70+ chapters of story and character development. But in the end all authors need criticism in order to make their story better for other readers that share the same views.
4yr
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[ New, confused, unsatisfied, dropping, upset reader information ] I didn't want to write a review at all, because making a review of my own story would be too biased and I'd rather leave it for the readers to make reviews, because you can't be your best judge, as you'll be too biased about yourself or something you made. But this isn't a review of the story, just information for new readers that are thinking about dropping the story because of the characters choices. But since I feel that something needs to be addressed, so having this posted here would be the better option since some people won't make it to Plot development + Character development & genres chapter to get full clarification for the plans and explanations of the story and characters. If anyone at all, is having irritation or problems with the MC, Ivery's character before chapter 19 where her character development starts then at least try to read the story to chapter 30, just to get a feel of how the whole story will be from then on. Ivery's character will continue to make changes until the very end, as well as the ML, Luther's character. I know and I can understand if anyone is frustrated with how Ivery responds and deals with her situations in the early chapters and there's a good reason why there's no immediate revenge. Most problems are addressed and explained in chapter 30 and even further than that as the story progresses. I'm writing this only because some people are dropping the story in early chapters for things that are already changed and meets their expectations of her character and in later chapters and even future chapters. Most problems will be resolved for you only if you read, that's all it takes, to read it through to chapter 30 if you can. Ivery's character was never going to stay naive, gullible, shallow, weak minded, irresponsible, and stupid as people have perceived her so far. And it was never in my plans to make her that way, that's just how she comes off. She's still a teenager in both lives so at some points she can be seen as immature or just plain stupid, as she gets older in the story and learns from her experiences, she will mature, all you have to do is give her time. This was always my plan for her. Her being the way she is at the start and how she will be at the end, will be proof of her development. The problem is some people aren't giving her a chance to even start to develop and drop the story at chapters 1-6, when there's other chapters that will hopefully resolve the problems they have with her. Ivery and Luther's relationship will definitely be misunderstood if you don't read, but it's already fully clarified in the story where their relationship is if you read on, all it takes to understand the story and it's characters is if it is read to certain chapters that explain it all. So I thank all of the readers that will consider this request of mine, and I thank all of the readers that are still with the story at the latest chapters.

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