[ New, confused, unsatisfied, dropping, upset reader information ] I didn't want to write a review at all, because making a review of my own story would be too biased and I'd rather leave it for the readers to make reviews, because you can't be your best judge, as you'll be too biased about yourself or something you made. But this isn't a review of the story, just information for new readers that are thinking about dropping the story because of the characters choices. But since I feel that something needs to be addressed, so having this posted here would be the better option since some people won't make it to Plot development + Character development & genres chapter to get full clarification for the plans and explanations of the story and characters. If anyone at all, is having irritation or problems with the MC, Ivery's character before chapter 19 where her character development starts then at least try to read the story to chapter 30, just to get a feel of how the whole story will be from then on. Ivery's character will continue to make changes until the very end, as well as the ML, Luther's character. I know and I can understand if anyone is frustrated with how Ivery responds and deals with her situations in the early chapters and there's a good reason why there's no immediate revenge. Most problems are addressed and explained in chapter 30 and even further than that as the story progresses. I'm writing this only because some people are dropping the story in early chapters for things that are already changed and meets their expectations of her character and in later chapters and even future chapters. Most problems will be resolved for you only if you read, that's all it takes, to read it through to chapter 30 if you can. Ivery's character was never going to stay naive, gullible, shallow, weak minded, irresponsible, and stupid as people have perceived her so far. And it was never in my plans to make her that way, that's just how she comes off. She's still a teenager in both lives so at some points she can be seen as immature or just plain stupid, as she gets older in the story and learns from her experiences, she will mature, all you have to do is give her time. This was always my plan for her. Her being the way she is at the start and how she will be at the end, will be proof of her development. The problem is some people aren't giving her a chance to even start to develop and drop the story at chapters 1-6, when there's other chapters that will hopefully resolve the problems they have with her. Ivery and Luther's relationship will definitely be misunderstood if you don't read, but it's already fully clarified in the story where their relationship is if you read on, all it takes to understand the story and it's characters is if it is read to certain chapters that explain it all. So I thank all of the readers that will consider this request of mine, and I thank all of the readers that are still with the story at the latest chapters.
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It’s okay author, some people are too impatient to want to see the story progress and give a chance for the characters to develop. They’re too quick to judge on a small portion of the story and drop it before they even get anywhere near the progression chapters. You cant immediately expect character change in 1-6 at all, that’s when the story is still being introduced and so are the characters. I don’t think Ivery is a bad character nor is she stupid, she’s just getting used to a one in a trillion situation and doesn’t make irrational decisions that could cause her problems, and once you learn about the past of the MC and ML, everything makes more sense why they are the way that they are. ( Spolier? ) Making her get immediate revenge on the Emperor and Empress would be a bad move, then everything wouldn’t have worked out, her getting an official status, her getting engaged to Luther and her having somewhere to live would’ve been impossible. Plus her goal isn’t even to get revenge, it’s to change Inannas fate, attacking Inannas parents wouldn’t have changed Inannas fate for the better, it just would’ve made everything worst for Inanna, and that’s not the goal, is it.
Honestly i am so upset with the mc and i was just about to drop the series it just seemed like a cheesy fanfic that has gore only to be edgy but i will at least try to read it through like you /the author/ said.I hope won't be disappointed.(*￣m￣) And as for you Glilly i will defend myself saying first impressions are important and the mc didn't seem to be likeable character .눈_눈 Okey!!!Sorry being mean Author(ಥ_ಥ). Just wanted give you my own opinion even if you didn't need it.I'm having major issues with mc right now but i'll read it through 30.And give another review.So look forward to it.(๑＞ڡ＜)☆
i'm at chapter 10 btw
I appreciate that you’re considering it 😊, but may I ask what problems do you have with the mc so far? I’d like to know what needs to be adjusted in the early chapters to make the story more enjoyable or at least tolerable for the readers, so feedback and constructive criticism helps me out. The problems that you have might be the same problems that other readers may have as well and I’d like to solve whatever problems that exist to the best of my ability. And I don’t know if it seems this way but this story is an original work of mine, not a fanfiction 😅. And maybe the story does comes off as edgy sometimes due to me being a horror and gore fanatic, so because of that I may overdo the gore sometimes, but I only just want a way to express this interest. The horror/gore isn’t really for the readers, it’s basically just in the story for me.
Is anyone out there alive to Give A Challenge ENOUGH to Be able to kill that insufferable ML? Tell me Someone, And It must Be Life-threatening Enough, If Not Then I am dropping this, If He doesn't Suffer for his actions and Face it's consequences then Droooop~ . I have No motivation To watch Them Grow Up Because They are kids, If He Has Mastered His Abilities and Is way too Overpowered To Be Even So as be 'Touched' Then This Unbalanced and Biased Story Leaves me No motivation To Continue Reading, If it were Me I would Summon A Demon Lord And Seal away The gods To Make their Infinity Worthless And Then They would Have to work hard for their Power, Then Only Will this Story be Remotely Interesting To read in my opinion, The Concept of Infinity Given To a Mortal itself is wrong, So this Story Is Unbalanced and Biased, The only Thing This Story Will have After I saw These reviews is .. I was Not looking for This thing, I have no interest To look At teenagers Growing up, They Should Suffer In their Other Lives As Consequence of Killing People Like they are Nothing The Would Be better Off Dying And Soul trapped In Endless Infinity That they themselves Embody. And Their Powers lie in their 'body' the Physical Body, Without Influencing Their souls, Because The MC Replaced The orignal. The Powers are Not theirs, They are Can be in theory Cloned, NOW THAT WOULD BE INTERESTING, And if the Powers Itself Comes from those gods, Then Those Gods Should be erased By other gods for Meddling with Mortal Affairs Because then they are not Gods. They Are Maybe Other Mortals Who were Given that power or Were Just Born with it, Because They Themselves are Irresponsible. No Hardwork Is Described in this story, And This Story Explicitly says 'If you are weak, You stay weak '. Even if there Are more deserving people there, The gods there chose Sh**s of The Greatest order People and Maybe the reason is because They cannot give That power to deserving People, Because the power is 'Infinite' So only Stupid people will Be Able to Achieve it For Balance...
