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And you’re one of my favorite readers πŸ₯°πŸ€—β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜Š

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[ New, confused, unsatisfied, dropping, upset reader information ] I didn't want to write a review at all, because making a review of my own story would be too biased and I'd rather leave it for the readers to make reviews, because you can't be your best judge, as you'll be too biased about yourself or something you made. But this isn't a review of the story, just information for new readers that are thinking about dropping the story because of the characters choices. But since I feel that something needs to be addressed, so having this posted here would be the better option since some people won't make it to Plot development + Character development & genres chapter to get full clarification for the plans and explanations of the story and characters. If anyone at all, is having irritation or problems with the MC, Ivery's character before chapter 19 where her character development starts then at least try to read the story to chapter 30, just to get a feel of how the whole story will be from then on. Ivery's character will continue to make changes until the very end, as well as the ML, Luther's character. I know and I can understand if anyone is frustrated with how Ivery responds and deals with her situations in the early chapters and there's a good reason why there's no immediate revenge. Most problems are addressed and explained in chapter 30 and even further than that as the story progresses. I'm writing this only because some people are dropping the story in early chapters for things that are already changed and meets their expectations of her character and in later chapters and even future chapters. Most problems will be resolved for you only if you read, that's all it takes, to read it through to chapter 30 if you can. Ivery's character was never going to stay naive, gullible, shallow, weak minded, irresponsible, and stupid as people have perceived her so far. And it was never in my plans to make her that way, that's just how she comes off. She's still a teenager in both lives so at some points she can be seen as immature or just plain stupid, as she gets older in the story and learns from her experiences, she will mature, all you have to do is give her time. This was always my plan for her. Her being the way she is at the start and how she will be at the end, will be proof of her development. The problem is some people aren't giving her a chance to even start to develop and drop the story at chapters 1-6, when there's other chapters that will hopefully resolve the problems they have with her. Ivery and Luther's relationship will definitely be misunderstood if you don't read, but it's already fully clarified in the story where their relationship is if you read on, all it takes to understand the story and it's characters is if it is read to certain chapters that explain it all. So I thank all of the readers that will consider this request of mine, and I thank all of the readers that are still with the story at the latest chapters.

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