Item: Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms
Rating: 5
Author: Rxel

RxelLv155yr

2019-04-17 19:49

Lovely to read through. As far as I can tell, there were little to no errors that were particularly glaring that disrupted the flow of reading. The Author writes with care and imagery that leaves me wanting to read more. The descriptive imagery made it easy for me to immerse myself in the story. Keep up the good work, Author! Eagerly waiting for more. 😆🎉

Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms

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