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XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor6yr
2019-02-26 07:57

Finally the author review. Hello everyone this is XOMatsumaeohana, this story will be written alongside Dream Star so the updates won't be as frequent. But there will be chapters every week. This story is set in the year 4019, and I'm using a different calender/month system since it's magic realism. This story was started as roles being assigned amongst friends on a discord server, so yes the main cast are based of actual users on WN/discord. It's been awhile for me since I last magic realism genre/fantasy, so I hope you bear with me and point out any confusing or parts that need to be explained. Lastly, the cover was made by me. It's 1000% my drawing, so if you see it being used anywhere. Please let me know. ҉ ٩(❊>∀<❊)۶҉ Hope you enjoy the story.

Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms

XOMatsumaeohana
4.8
268 Chs

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XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

changed it to "romance fiction" due to a suggestion but like my review stated this will focus on magical realism and fantasy. Romance will be key, but I believe there will be more of a balance between all three.

5yr
XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

29/ 3/18. --> Cover change to an image found on pin interest with minor changes/affects added. Do not own the cover. credit to owners.

5yr
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Winter_Prison
Winter_PrisonLv14

Reasons why you should read this story. • Writing Quality, very good. While there are a few grammar mistakes and occasional typo's. The author fixes it up when you mention it. The writing flow is stable, so most of the time I don't see the mistakes • Stability of updates, since this is the authors 2nd story, I understand why there's no update schedule. She still brings us at least 5-7 chapters a week. • Story development and Character design, the plot is very interesting for me. While there's many fantasy/magical realism novels out there. This one is a lot different and does not bear any resemblance to them. The characters are well developed. They are being introduced slowly and the author is writing arcs for all the main cast, so we will get to know them all individually. From reading her previous story, I can give a huge thumbs up for character development.

5yr

xXyuzuXx
xXyuzuXxLv13

I've read the authors previous work dream star, and now I'm fascinated to see what she can do with this type of setting. It's unlike her previous romance novel set in modern times; and yet she seems to grasp the romance concept better here. The update stability seems stable the last few days, while I have a few chapters to catch up on. I'm liking where the story is going so far. Keep up the good WOR.

5yr
Teo
TeoLv5

I think the writing style is good and having read dream star I am curious at what can miss XOmatsumaeohana do with a magic realism setting. I am pretty sure that those who start reading this will get hooked in it

6yr
XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

New Author review (additional information) • new cover photo is a image found on pin-interest and edited by me. • Plan to have 500-600 Chapters, word count is between 900-1.5K (sometimes higher depending) •Update: 2-3 Updates (vary) (UK timezone) • Official discord -> https://discord.gg/9Cwt9Jz

5yr
SasakiYume
SasakiYumeLv4

√ Once again dear author XOMatsumaeohana surprises us with yet another brilliant story. I like how distinctly different this story is with her other one despite having the romance genre. Though the setting is different than her old one and that may explain the difference. The romance here is written more subtly, it's not overdone in anyway and seemed to just fit perfectly. Though I mainly read for the romance, the magical realism aspect interests me. And I want to see how these mysteries unfold.

5yr
DantallionNoShouko
DantallionNoShoukoLv13

6 chapters, 6 Quality chapters. XOMatsumaeohana is challenging herself by writing in a genre outside her comfort zone. I was surprised when she posted this, since I know her to only write romance. I was pleasantly surprised when I saw how well developed and thought out the plot is, and characters. Despite only small amount of chapters, looking forward to reading more.

6yr
HNatsu
HNatsuLv4

Review Valid Till Chapter 6 Story development: While this is still a relatively new story, I can tell that the author has already developed a stable plot line. So far were in the introduction chapters and the main cast are slowly appearing. From the chapters so far, bits and pieces of the "danger" is showing up. Nothing too major is being revealed, allowing us readers to develop questions and ideas. Character design: The female lead Queen Lyn, in contrast to the others previous story Dream star. The strong side of the female lead is presented first. Queen Lyn's background, her knights and the people in her kingdom - are all well thought out and developed. While it's too soon to judge the other characters, I trust this author regarding character development. Writing Quality: If you want a story with good grammar, then read XOMatsumaeohana stories. While there's the occasions typo, that anyone makes. Her grammar and writing style is a lot more fluent than most stories you find on the site. Stability of updates: Since this is still a new story, no release schedule yet. But this is quite a lot of chapters already for a new story.

6yr
MyOwnStory
MyOwnStoryLv11

My thoughts on the first chapter. While there's only one chapter out, I'm really liking the story and plot line. The author other work dream star really caught my attention because of how she focuses/describes character thoughts well. So I guarantee that the character development will be good here too.

6yr
ThePromise_
ThePromise_Lv13

with 29 chapters out, I can give a solid review. If you've read XOMatsumaeohana previous works Dream Star and expect the same complicated plot line. Then think again, this novel is completely unlike Dream Star. Perhaps due to the historical/magical realism element but even the romance here is written subtly and not overdone. She has fleshed out the main characters and the secondary cast is used well, not overshadowing the main characters (I think you can change King Allen to main cast, he appears quite frequently) Since we're still on volume 1 nothing too significant has happened yet. However, the pacing is good. I'm glad the author decided not to rush into the dispute with the snow kingdom; and is focusing on building up the plot first. The mysteries of King kazuya, King Allen's feelings. Why her knights are being targeted? Her knights appear to have complex backgrounds, is this all just a coincidence? I'm looking forward to seeing how this story ends up.

5yr
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