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EroFan
EroFanLv41yr
2023-09-01 13:22

it started really good! really really good in fact! but it lost all shine when author introduced the function where MC could control the hos women's meter, namely ero meter and love meter... it just lost its shine man, it felt stuffy and annoying, the fact that he can control them at some point threw away the expectations of uncertainty whenever he dors something and chooses something...

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EroFan
EroFanLv4

i caught up, and its good, really fuxking good!!!thankfully, author did not put too much emphasis on MC being able to freely control the meter of his women! gosh, that would have been horrible.i do hope author introduce impregnation early and let his MC impregnate the older women of the harem, it feels extremely satisfying when a student impregnate women while still at college without having had to worry of money...and maybe go the ultimate degenerate route and have MC go in to an affair with his own mother and even impregnate her with his child, ofcourse without any genetic disorders with his system's help... that's reserved for the ultimate degenerate route though....

EroFan
EroFanLv4

this is good, it has better content than any other novel with similar plots. it has better pacing and atleast the interaction with the characters and MC and how he gets them is well thought and has better logics than most

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Big_Hank
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Author ruined his own novel on ch 45 you know I really didn't like cassie and the way mc was si m p ing for her but then the way she started fearing he would leave her and the way she started being obedient to him, she got likable with her not acting annoying and violent and pushing around m c as if he is her sla v e but in ch 45 mc made the worst decision in chossing the 2 heart option and then even more worse option making her hatred to full. How re tar d ed can the author be? She kicked him in the stomach and even made him bleed from the head and even tried to kill him bro what was the point of all that? And afterwards you can see author trying to make cassie dominate m c and he even asking for permission lol why would he even need her opinion? And she starts acting c oc k y again just like before, where she is hitting him and even insulting him on full heart and mc is like "awww I should spoil her" tch my worst decision ever to buy the premium upto ch 46 lol this people don't even review properly but I should have expected given the review is 4.2 without any explanation but Yeah starting was really good even when there were some uncomfortable things he did or the way he acted all goody shoes and we didn't even get any mi I f after the convenience store lady. Was waiting for his first love mi I f and the teacher but it kept dragging on and on and it even has too much s** with cassie from 1-45 like even the author is si m ping for her my god I think it's his real life c u c k story where the girl he is s i m ping is stolen by another guy and he still likes her

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