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Rafi_Mohd
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2023-07-11 02:00

Upto chap 26 or something it's was good.. but after that you are using Chatgpt to correct the typos and sentence and it ruin the first pov . the feeling behind the sentence i can't seem to see it anymore..Please write in your own sentence even if it has typos mistake, it is ok for us...

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Author ruined his own novel on ch 45 you know I really didn't like cassie and the way mc was si m p ing for her but then the way she started fearing he would leave her and the way she started being obedient to him, she got likable with her not acting annoying and violent and pushing around m c as if he is her sla v e but in ch 45 mc made the worst decision in chossing the 2 heart option and then even more worse option making her hatred to full. How re tar d ed can the author be? She kicked him in the stomach and even made him bleed from the head and even tried to kill him bro what was the point of all that? And afterwards you can see author trying to make cassie dominate m c and he even asking for permission lol why would he even need her opinion? And she starts acting c oc k y again just like before, where she is hitting him and even insulting him on full heart and mc is like "awww I should spoil her" tch my worst decision ever to buy the premium upto ch 46 lol this people don't even review properly but I should have expected given the review is 4.2 without any explanation but Yeah starting was really good even when there were some uncomfortable things he did or the way he acted all goody shoes and we didn't even get any mi I f after the convenience store lady. Was waiting for his first love mi I f and the teacher but it kept dragging on and on and it even has too much s** with cassie from 1-45 like even the author is si m ping for her my god I think it's his real life c u c k story where the girl he is s i m ping is stolen by another guy and he still likes her

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