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ImmortalJohnnySins
ImmortalJohnnySinsLv145yr
2019-08-05 08:16

The main protagonist is not smart. As such, the main protagonist does not make good decisions and that contributes to a bad reader experience. For instance, the main protagonist acts really clever in certain situations, but really dumb in other situations as though he was never clever. Lots of inconsistency in main protagonists character

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Acasualpawn
AcasualpawnLv2

I dislike retarded MC /:

Acasualpawn
AcasualpawnLv2

Webnovel, please introduce some quality novels in survey. Nine Yang Sword Saint? Really? And stop blocking comments.

LungsFillDeflate
LungsFillDeflateLv4

Dude there's only 10 chapters way too early to leave a review

Ebose00
Ebose00Lv4

Hmmmm

MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

They block comments and reading the synopsis what a GREATMOVE

gavvas
gavvasLv15

when u rate it with 1out of 5 when ur reader status is at 0 chapters

A_Canadian
A_CanadianLv11

Okay that seems to make sense.

cerberus4452
cerberus4452Lv14

i like the story it is new and there is some bad and some good points.

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Lyandy10
Lyandy10Lv12

Let me just start off with saying I only read to chapter 16. Ignore this if that irks you. Ok, I was first attracted to this novel due to its description and it’s genre, video games. I was expecting an international mercenary dunking on some kids that are touching guns for the first time. But the MC acts nothing like an experienced mercenary let alone one that is considered “international”. Whatever that means. He only has great aim and descriptions of being prepared and calm-faced. And the enemy players are pretty generic. Next, the game features. Everything basically costs money. There’s that feature where if you attack first, you turn yellow-named. And killing makes you red named. And it’s takes 3 days to turn yellow from red and 1 day for yellow to white. And that’s with 1 pvp point. And dying causes you to lose a level, a chance for an item unless you are red named which it then becomes 100%, and getting locked out of your account for 12 hours. Even if people are charging at you, unless they hit you, you are technically still out of battle. Next, story. It starts off already in the game for probably a month. We don’t get to see the MC in his world or transmigrating. He’s also already got fitted in with his identity. He has some connections and apparently lives somewhere high up on a building. Then some game stuff and he fights and offends one of the largest mercenary groups within the game with 10,000+ players. He’s a solo player btw so far. Which is 16 chapters. And there’s my review, I wasn’t invested enough to keep reading and seeing if this was better. So you can ignore this review if you were looking for a review with more credibility from more chapters read.

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