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gavvas1yrCommentedCh 13 Creating His Own System- gavvas1yrCommented
You're telling me that 'slave 1' wasn't taken? I love your story but in a world with billions of future players with some even capable of owning thousands of AI npc's this feature is kind of ridiculous. Even modern games with a maximum of a couple tens of millions of players have # features. C'mon man/girl/whatever-pronoun-you-prefer
<The name "Andy" has already been taken. Please choose another name.> - gavvas1yrReplied to gavvas
i mean it's rarely any mass at all but it is still mass no?
Therefore, since light has no mass, forcing it to behave in a certain way was virtually effortless for him. The only real hurdle was to manage its celerity. The Reiga's speed of movement far exceeded his reaction time, so he had to plan in advance every move he planned to do with it. - gavvas1yrCommented
I'm by no means a physicist but isn't energy = mass * the speed of light squared? or in other words (e/c**2) = mass. aka energy has mass?
Therefore, since light has no mass, forcing it to behave in a certain way was virtually effortless for him. The only real hurdle was to manage its celerity. The Reiga's speed of movement far exceeded his reaction time, so he had to plan in advance every move he planned to do with it. - gavvas1yrPosted
Writing quality: if we're talking grammar then it's fine. Stability of updates: picked this up like 1 hour ago so i wouldn't know. Story development: went to like chapter 11 so also wouldn't know. Character design and World Background: Not only is this guy the best assasin in the world, apparantly he is able to create human like AI and memorise it's entire code which apparantly took him hours to write (after memorization mind you). Did this guy also cure cancer while having sex with every mother in his city? He, a full-time assasin, is able to create a code so complex that it simulates the human mind, which will take hundreds of thousands, if not millions of lines of code, make it reach human level responsiveness and apparantly before any other organization on earth has. Even without faktoring in the impossibility of him arriving at this code before anyone else, even the mere computing power of such a program would require understanding of quantum physics decades or even centuries beyond the collective knowledge of the entire humankind on the topic. I hate to be a party pooper but god damn does this plot point annoy me. You don't have to write your character as the second coming of christ.
- gavvas1yrCommented
The consistency on which your world operates is one of its main strengths. Even if jake gets "nerfed" its consistent with the rules you have set so far. It would be more annoying if, like many other novels on this site, jake would automatically be the one with the most potential and best among his generation on the scale of THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE. All in all i think you should continue with creating your vision without changing it based on fan feedback you disagree with
Ch 688 New Alliance - gavvas1yrPosted
This is possibly the most entertaining novel i've read. This and 'I hate systems' are probably the only reason i visit this website full of one-dimensional characters, ill thought through plot points, painfully cringy cliches where every story is "this other story but with a twist!" It's a genuenly amazing read and, as someone who briefly tried to write my own story, gives me the same feeling i get when comparing myself to the author behind lord of the mysteries. It starts off slow and gets really good from the second ordeal and onwards, but thats not to say that the earlier content failed to entertain. This novel deserves more attention.
- gavvas2yrCommented
So they'll kill anything in two punches?
"Alright give me your attention. This task purpose was only to give us a glimpse at your fitness level and to be frank, it's horrible. So starting from today until you awaken, you will have to run 5 km on the treadmill, do 50 pushups, 50 sit-ups, 50 squats for the next 30 days." - gavvas3yrCommentedCh 563 A Ghost with Shadow
- gavvas3yrReplied to LazyScholar
that's partially it. But what I believe to be the main reason was the fact that he could not seperate himself from his patients (if we use the doctor analogy). He never saw himself as a savior, but a friend that wanted to help them. This resulted in him getting too close with them which hurt him even more if he failed. His teacher knew this which is why he wanted him to leave. In other words, the teacher wanted him to leave for his own sake
Ch 563 A Ghost with Shadow - gavvas3yrCommented
Can someone please explain this to me? Everyone else is referencing the earlier question but doesn't his answer to both questions completely contradict eachother?
Shang Jianyao replied without hesitation, "Isn't that a good thing?" - gavvas3yrCommented
Considering the end of the first death mission I wouldn't be so sure
Ben believed he was taking a dangerous risk as an MC, straying so far from the foundational formula... Yet, he dared to do it because he was also living in this world! It was dangerous to have enemies when his plot armor was condom thin! - gavvas3yrReplied to Arkinslize
ah, ok. its nice that you thought this through
Faced with so much Flintium, he increased the ultraviolet light output and their wicked influence vanished as if it had never existed. He then tilted head down and soon after, he popped down out of the cave ceiling. - gavvas3yrCommented
can someone explain how this works? it sounds like it has a real scientific basis and im curious
Faced with so much Flintium, he increased the ultraviolet light output and their wicked influence vanished as if it had never existed. He then tilted head down and soon after, he popped down out of the cave ceiling. - gavvas3yrCommented
...of a woman... Please... I'm dying
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