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_Edward_Alric_
_Edward_Alric_Lv45yr
2019-03-30 07:49

At the beginning u might find it a little only a little bit boring but with the story progression it gets beyond awesome its just so perfect specially the concept with the rebirth it's totally new, I specially like the bonding between the elite five hope it stays this way till the end pls, I mean in so many situations sometimes the deepest of friendships breaks even if for a little while it does hope that's not the case here, pls Author let their bonding last its just so beautiful to see, the elite five truly inspired me a lot not only me actually, Kyle nd kay their bonding is another awesome thing nd I totally like the new principle it's just so awesome ✔ New concept in reincarnation ✔ Protagonist is awesome ✔ Awesome world background ✔ Sincere Brotherhood ✔ True sibling bonding ✔ Action Just awesome

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PsyberRose
PsyberRoseAuthor

Thank you SO much for your wonderful review, Edward. I hope the novel will continue to bring happiness and joy. hehehe. As for their bond, well ... not much of a spoiler I hope but yes, their bond is meant to stay forever. A tie that can never be broken ... shaken/tested maybe, but never broken. Does that help? (♥ω♥ ) ~♪

_Edward_Alric_
_Edward_Alric_Lv4

A lot, thx so much for telling nd looking forward for way more

PsyberRose:Thank you SO much for your wonderful review, Edward. I hope the novel will continue to bring happiness and joy. hehehe. As for their bond, well ... not much of a spoiler I hope but yes, their bond is meant to stay forever. A tie that can never be broken ... shaken/tested maybe, but never broken. Does that help? (♥ω♥ ) ~♪
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(I will start with the positive critics before the negative ones. 😉) No lie, at the beginning of this novel I was like "this is gonna be a drag 😫" but I'm glad I didn't drop it. It didn't take me long to be hooked. Reading this novel has made me realise that I have overrated *a lot* of novels. I am amazed how the writer mixed many controversial ideas into this...and make it a bomb without making everything jumbled up or confusing. Like how? I couldn't drop my phone after I began reading this novel. I would not be surprised if he was a professional writer. Psychological comedy drama romance revenge rebirth action undercover mystery .... The theme list goes on and on. The diversity not only lied in the themes but also the culture, depicted in the plot and setting...it has been well joined no gaps at all. Most novels on this platform are kind of predictable when it came to the romance, but here, all my guesses kept on being shut down and unlike the others, the romance is so sweet sexy and pure at the same time. I have been amazed There is no overlap in the characters which is quite common, since it is difficult to create and present completely different personas when writing. It's easy to mix them up or end up loosing the depth of the character. But surprisingly the writer pulled it off! The novel is no lie a great one it has potential to be best selling, as in yes it can enter the market...and I would buy it! It has potential to even be produced into series or anime without doubt. But there is room for improvement. For example, the "warnings" about the content having possible violence or sexual content destroys the flow of the novel. Like am enjoying the book, am so into it and then boom these sentences that are not even part of the story jump out of my face like what on earth? I suggest they use icons on the chapters themselves to warn readers and possible mature content so we don't have to waste..er I mean delay our interaction with the characters. Like I came across a whole paragraph *during* the *climax* of the story warning me about possible mature content! 😠 like did you have to use half of my screen with something you can use a symbol for? And please make Kyle bisexual 🙈 Hehehe

JamesAnthony1999
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This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review. So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc. The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be. The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world. Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters. I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides. When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on. A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit. Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now. Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.

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