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Nick_Stefan
Nick_StefanLv135yr
2019-10-09 10:05

A fun read so far and interesting enough to keep me invested. The story is not overtly complex and carries a light tone most of the time with elements of light humor to spice up the chapters. The way the simplicity honestly helps the story in my opinion and makes the progression seem natural through the MC's perspective and provides vivid imagery for characters and battles. I would have personally boosted the review to 5 stars but the spelling mistakes and the MC having about an average intelligence (when the MC gets an opportunity to achieve a lower profile is not noticed immediately even though they complained about their appearance in the previous chapter) drives it somewhat down for me. I admit though that I am biased in this matter as I enjoy genius types of characters and most would probably overlook these matters.

My Life as a Salamander

brother_pheonix
4.5
145 Chs

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brother_pheonix
brother_pheonixAuthor

Thank you very much for your review. I often wondered about the IQ constitution of the MC and how to make things more enjoyable for my readers. How to state it in such a way to not make the story overly complex and still have it enjoyable is something I struggle with. I will seek to improve.

5yr
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Aeternabilis
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so basically the stories really good and quite interesting however when you get around 43? It all turns to sht tbh. The whole reason I read and wanted to read the story was because he is a monster/serpent dragon. However not only do you turn him human but then he gets a necromancer job ???? Like what tf is the point just get him to be reborn as a human with a dragon bloodline if you wanted that and not waste my time.. Swear it happens with all stories like this. They all start out really well then suddenly they always have to be turned into humans like I read and wanted to read the story because he wasnt. It wasnt the same old plot. Really disappointed. Good read up to 43 but then stop. Story loses its essence, its core... if you want a long story then dont recommend.

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Reveal spoiler

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One word “amazing” it’s really good that’s all I can say because I suck at writing stuff but its really good

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Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15

Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.

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VerdantUtopia
VerdantUtopiaLv2

Ok, so, basically, when the story starts he wakes up in a castle and is hatched by a girl. At the start, that was my problem. I like MCs where they are independent but he gets trapped by this girl is forced to be his familiar and the girl forces him to do things. I did not like this because it hindered his growth and also the girl was pretty annoying. Than he finally escapes. YAAA!!! But he misses her. BOOOOO!!! I mean like, you are free! Come on, grow up, forget about her! But noooooo! Instead, he finds her again and goes up to her and tells her who he is, even though he is free! That is at the point where I just dropped this, no questions asked. If you like independent MCs who do not care about anyone else like me, this novel is not for you. Even though I rated this a 3.2, my personal rating would be 0.1. (Dropped Chapter 26)

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Red_Roman
Red_RomanLv12

The story is good and ,normally,I would enjoy it....but the MC is a slave with Stockhom Syndrome and a (plot forced) f*cking hero complex. If that's your thing you'll love this story.

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reincarnation_end
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This book is amazing The story pace a bit rushed Feeling of satisfaction 100% World building satisfactory without any confusions OP MC with a bueutiful girl : check

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1END1Lv2

A good novel.. I am looking forward to its development. And more chapters 😘 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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TonhaoSpawn
TonhaoSpawnLv6

Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.

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Orbit5565
Orbit5565Lv2

I fount this novel one day ago and did not stop reading until I had finished the entire thing. The characters are lovable and take logical actions that don’t leave you thinking that they are only doing something for the plot. The story so far is fun and has developed well with decent world building. The writer has not put himself into a corner and has allowed the story to progress steadily if a bit fast. The only problem I have with the writing it that there is sometimes letters or spaces missing which while they don’t destroy the reading experience or story can be quite annoying. All in all I think it an amazing novel and I would recommend it.

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